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for Halloween Mix-Up

by Tassanaburrfoot

person wudelfin
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
such a well written chapter
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hopefully not! Eew!! I'm loving where your going so far in that I don't have a clue where your going. (Does that make sense??)
One last thing...
MORE SEV!!!!!!
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I didn't realize she accidentally broke up Seamus and Parvarti, and sort of broke up Harry and Ginny. Her rant, laying out all her issues at once, makes the situation exceptionally bad. Who knows if Draco is actually in love or is just readjusting his memories? I'm rooting for him out of all the guys. Seamus wouldn't be bad either, but maybe the girls would start liking her again if he got back together with Parvarti.

When did Lavender and Parvarti start using terms like "blood traitor"? Are they just looking to lash out or are they just prejudiced?
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. I hope that Hermione does go with Draco to his home for the holidays, as it would be the safest for her, Parvati and Lavender are both idiots treating Hermione like they did. I look forward to reading more soon.
person hgelman
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione - she is realizing just how convoluted the entire situation is. I don't think that she should end up with Ron (not my favorite ship). At this point, I am rooting for either Draco or Snape. Of course, Harry has not had a 'turn' yet - I can't wait to see how you play that one out! Great job - I'm really enjoying this story!
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I am glad that Ron has been satisfied for now. I can't wait to read more soon to see if Harry breaks and needs to be with her also.
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter. I hope that Ron does get it over with. I hope that Hermione can find a safe place to stay for the holidays. I can't wait to read the next chapter soon.
person wicraven
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great post. Love the story, please post again soon. Thanks.
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.