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by Tassanaburrfoot

person wudelfin
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit if the spell doesn't work on him. *hint*
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whimpers...thats not fair....whimpers...
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

i would just like to honestly commend your work with this story
it is fantastic!
i've been reading it religiously lol which is saying somethign because i don't agree with the whole religion thing
but this story just has everything to keep me coming back
i can't believe how excited i was when Lucius was home for christmas
because in the previous chapter i was like aww there may not be any Lucius action but there was!
thankyou!
I've come to enjoy the multiple people being with hermione
orginally i was a draco/hermione fan lol but anyway i'm boring you

so yeah i was originally just dropping by to review the fantastic literary ability thats been shown throughout this piece
i've been recommending it
ALOT lol
so hopefully you'll get way more hits and reviews
because it really is fantastic
congradulations!
keep posting!
and keep me updated!
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was an excellent chapter. I can't wait to read more soon.
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Trust us, we're grateful you updated so soon explaining somewhat how Lucius is impacted by the spell. Granted, we don't know if Lucius is fooling himself or not, but it gives us a sense of relief that he doesn't seem to feel an insane amount of lust for her at the moment. The chaste kiss at the end that Lucius gives to Hermione is appropriately creepy.
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I think Lucius was somewhat affected by the spell even though he is married, otherwise why would he have kissed Hermione on the lips. I do think he can avoid her more than the others though. I can't wait to read more. I wonder how Blaise and the other boys who attacked her are fairing since they are being denied.
person wicraven
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great post. Love the story, please post again soon. Thanks.
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
incest, guy on guy and threesomes ... looks like Lucius might be just a teensy bit affected .... oh please oh please oh please ... lol!
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey loving ur story, just read all 23 chapters... i hope severus is her true love... i love severus...it would be cool if draco and severus are both her true loves but if i had a choice it would be severus