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ooh sorry forgot. Congrats on the wedding.

This story really needs a beta, it has great potential, but there are alot of mistakes like names not being capitalized using "u" instead of "you" and spelling Sirius' name "Sirus". If you get a beta reader or if you even just read over what you've written before you post it this story would go from good to great!

OMG! I am loving your story!!!

I can't wait for your next update... Oh! And congratulation on your wedding ^_^

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that was rly rly good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!bravo!!!!bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love both of those couples!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...and congrats on the wedding!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Soooo need chapter 5!!!!

You don't mind if I kick Siri or some people there, do you? I know they don't know the true but they just looked at poeple from their outside ...

Congratulate on Wedding too~!!

AH! Evil, evil, evil! You are cruel! I love it!

That was hottness.

Very hot! Keep at it lovely!

HAHAHAHAHA! The Twins and Ginny had to talk the hat out of slytherin! I like it! Awesome! Well I can't wait for the next chapter!!