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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!!! What was the curse? Is the baby okay? I sooo need chapter 6!!!!
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Those Gryffindor's are going to pay if something happens to Harry&Daco's baby.
Please update chapter 6 soon. ^_^
Please update chapter 6 soon. ^_^
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good storyline Severus with Remus who is nice in the past. Harry is how far along in his pregnancy? Congrats on your wedding hope you will be able to finish this story one day.
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December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think you should put Lily and James with Severus. Because it would be too funny to pass up.
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December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Candidates for third person with Lily and James:
--Molly, before she became Molly Weasley. Could be one of the reasons she always felt like a mother to Harry. Because she once had a fling with James, before marrying Arthur.
--Quidditch player from James's team
--a Muggle friend of Lily's whom they seduce over the holiday season when they're allowed to return home. How would a Muggle react? How would James view the idea of doing it with a Muggle girl/boy? Exciting? Degrading? Powerful?
--Ludo Bagman. If Lily consumed enough Firewhiskey she might go for it hahaha
That's all I got right now for suggestions. I really like the idea of Molly, just because Fred and George's reactions would be priceless.
Good luck! Great story ideas by the way, I enjoyed reading!
--Molly, before she became Molly Weasley. Could be one of the reasons she always felt like a mother to Harry. Because she once had a fling with James, before marrying Arthur.
--Quidditch player from James's team
--a Muggle friend of Lily's whom they seduce over the holiday season when they're allowed to return home. How would a Muggle react? How would James view the idea of doing it with a Muggle girl/boy? Exciting? Degrading? Powerful?
--Ludo Bagman. If Lily consumed enough Firewhiskey she might go for it hahaha
That's all I got right now for suggestions. I really like the idea of Molly, just because Fred and George's reactions would be priceless.
Good luck! Great story ideas by the way, I enjoyed reading!
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December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have read what you have posted so far and I find it to be very well written with a very good plot. I am really looking forward to the next chapter, just can't wait to find out what happens next. :)
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December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love It. Put them with Remus
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December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey just to let you know you put that authors note up twice. Ok hhhmmmm. Well by specifying not Sirius you dont really give us much to work with. Lupin is my all time favorite character but i love to see him with Snape. but i suppose a threesome between him, James and Lily wouldnt be too bad.
This is prettty sick but a secret threesome between them and peter would work very well with what happens in the future and makes his betrayal even worse. but hey thats a bit squicky, cant stand the rat and i think i'd be more likely to throw up than harry with the thought of it. Oh well.
How about another Gryffindor. Cos there have to be some more females other than soon to be Alice Longbottom. I cant see James prejudice unbending enough to allow a huff or a Rav. But either way do what ya wanna do. Just let my darling Remus have somebody.
Love the story. cant wait for next update. Is there any chance yu can email me when you update cos i dont wanna miss it.
Vittani@aol.com
This is prettty sick but a secret threesome between them and peter would work very well with what happens in the future and makes his betrayal even worse. but hey thats a bit squicky, cant stand the rat and i think i'd be more likely to throw up than harry with the thought of it. Oh well.
How about another Gryffindor. Cos there have to be some more females other than soon to be Alice Longbottom. I cant see James prejudice unbending enough to allow a huff or a Rav. But either way do what ya wanna do. Just let my darling Remus have somebody.
Love the story. cant wait for next update. Is there any chance yu can email me when you update cos i dont wanna miss it.
Vittani@aol.com