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for Flesh Canvas

by Jemixe

schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved it!!!
person misslala
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was really interesting! I like the idea of the bodies as a canvas and a way to bring them closer together. Almost "Girl with a Pearl Earring" meets HP. :D Very nice. :) Thanks for sharing.
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was inexpicably hot. Inexpicably, why? Because there was no sex, no real nakedness yet it warmed my flesh; heated my body. You have an amazing talent. Every word painted life; made it real. The story was beautifully written and made me wish there was more but glad that it wasn't drawn out.
I loved that Draco wanted to paint him, paint on him. To use beauty to create beauty. When Draco thought that he'd wish to save it, to teasure it always I had a little morbid thought of skinning Harry and framing it. While I realized it was a sick thought, I also thought it sweet. Weird I know.
It's pieces like this that encourages me to keep writing. Thank you for sharing.

Nicole
MisstressNicole@hotmail.com
person NightLo
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is beautiful and nice, and the atmosphere around the two is so peaceful...thanks for it...
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was brilliant! Oh GOD! I loved it! Thank you so nmuch for posting it!
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! This is perfect! Though it would make a great novel!