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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! I hope there's more to this somehow! I really enjoyed it and felt terrible for Harry when Mr Malfoy was making him all hot and bothered in front of everyone! Haha! The jinxing of Snape was hilarious too! I would have paid good galleons to see that!
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really interesting and got even better with chapter two, but did you need to end it with such a nasty cliffy? That's so mean *pout*
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Need chapter 3!
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Have you written part 3? If you have please post it today! I'm going away tomorrow and I'm dying to know what happens next! Thanks :-)
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I am so hooked. I really can't wait to see where you go with this. Really well done. Great characterizations, good pacing, interesting choice of charms. This seems like a strong start to a really excellent story.
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Me likey. ^_^ No OOCness or anything. I've also never heard of Sensory Charms and the like before, so kudos for that.
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Secret Lust is the best lust.
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I sooo need chapter 3!!!
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
>_< That was so cruel!The suspense is overwhelming. Can't wait for CH 3.
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome job! I soooo cannot wait to see what Draco has planned for the night!!! The duel was awesome-- Draco's victory was quick, but more like a teaser. Nice job!