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for An Unexpected Guest

by ghildred

person antosha
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done! What a fun romp! I love watching these three having a good time
person dumbolino
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, just wow.
person MDR
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked the story all the way until the end there. Could you please put the transgender warning in your summary along with the others? Give a guy some warning....
person Hermyone
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start can't wait for chapter 2, it will be a great threesome.
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome job and oh my gosh, the memories being interrupted during sex brings to mind. I personally usually end up laughing at the shocked look on the person's face for catching me and my partner en flagrante.

Post more soon. Can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. :D
person Anon
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay.. bout the cliffie.. I'll quote Stewie Griffin for this one.. " I am going to KILL you!"
:P

Honestly, though, it was a nice story and a second chapter would make me happy. ;)
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lord!!! WHY is Luna in their bedroom? continue the story.. that would be cool! I was thrilled to see a new harry/ginny fic sinc I've read almost all the others.
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha that was great

keep it going
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As far as pure H/G smut goes, not bad so far. The fact that you're bringing in Luna, probably my favorite fanfic character, is a big plus.