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This is again for SoftObsidian74. Thanks for clearing up the misunderstanding I had about Ron being portrayed as a user in this fic. I thought that the purpose of this fic was to give Ron a chance to be shown as a stronger character and not just be brushed aside for Harry or Draco to claim Hermione. So, I was a bit confused by your plot idea. I (like you) think that "gingers" can be sexy. I guess that I take after my mother because my father is a redhead. I'm a brunette like Mom, but I have red and gold highlights and fair skin that sunburns easily. Both gifts from Daddy's genetic pool.

I'm glad that my enjoyment of this fic helps you to feel less "pervy". I personally don't have a problem with threesome/moresomes in fics if 3 criteria are met. The first is I must like all the characters involved in the relationship. The second rule is there must be genuine emotion amongst all participants. And finally, the sex must be consensual. All 3 of those rules have been met in this fic. I know some might debate whether Hermione was willing, but I think she wanted all 3 of them. I just think she was nervous about giving up the control to them. Once she did, she discovered that the experience was pleasurable. Had she never experienced pleasure, then, I would have deemed the story a rape fic, and I wouldn't have read any more. Again, I'm not trying to stir up trouble, but I don't like rape fics. I do like to read D/S fics. This fic is most definitely a D/S fic. It's also my fantasy fic because I've always wanted a HP fic where Harry, Ron, and Draco get to have Hermione at the same time (I guess great minds think alike--heehee). I've read Harry/Hermione/Ron and Harry/Hermione/Draco menages, but I've never read one with all 3 boys and Hermione. And thank you both IMMENSELY for this wonderful fic--Thank You for requesting it and Thank You ReiRei for writing it. You both broke new ground because I firmly believe this fic is the first of its kind. Congrats to you both!!!

Oh Tarnished I'm in total agreement with you about not short changing Ron..that was the challenge. I was just giving some suggestions about where the plot could go. You're right, Ron gets the short end of the stick a lot probably because he's a ginger....but gingers can be so fucking sexy...I also love Dark! Harry and Draco is my baby....so yea, keeping all three involved is the ultimate. Anyways, just wanted to say that it's cool you're enjoying this fic too..I don't feel like such a perv for enjoying Hermione getting stuffed like a thanksgiving turkey : )

Damn you're so nasty! LOVE it, I've been waiting for all 3 of them to hit it like that. I like the way you explained why Ron would share her with Draco and the way it pissed Draco off. Where to take it hmm...

maybe it would be fun to see either Draco and Ron get into some sort of competition to appeal to Hermione's masochistic urges...each boy testing her limits and trying to out dominate the other in order to win her affection while her non sexual relationships with them both get stronger, making it more complicated to choose for her and making them more possessive....or maybe Draco could actually try a new angle and try to get to know Hermione better non sexually and get in her head and try to make her see that Ron is not the one for her and is just using her....or maybe Hermione could play them all by getting her kicks on with each of them on the down low with an unexpected conclusion once its revealed?

eh..I don't know..you know I'm not good with plot Rei, that's why I issued the challenge...I trust you...you're brilliant as evidenced by your other stories...I'll be re-reading this chapter before going to bed tonight though for good dreams : )

'til my next review or your next update

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Oh, you have made me so very HAPPY!!! You stuffed Hermione like a Thanksgiving turkey. Goody!!! This is exactly how I always pictured the way the 3 wizards would take her. You even put them in the positions that I always thought they would choose the first time they did this. Yes, I expect to see them take her like this again. Actually, I expect Hermione to demand it of them--heehee--You said it was the greatest pleasure that she's ever known. I would think that she'd want to experience it again. Because Hermione is always scolding or chastizing him with her "Ronald" this and "Ronald" that, I always assumed that Ron would want to shut that pretty mouth up one day. As for Harry, he's the most mild mannered of the bunch, and I think he'd choose the most traditional spot. I always thought Draco would go for her ass. Actually, I always thought he'd spank it before he thrust inside it, but a reader can't have everything. The spanking would be Draco's way of paying her back for all her verbal insults over the years and for that time she socked him 3rd year (heehee).

I know that this is Soft Obsidian's fic, and you should go with her requests before mine. But if I might be permitted to put my two cents worth into how the plotline should go, I would love to see the jealousy between Draco and Ron play out with Harry acting as the go between to finally bring all 4 of them together. It makes sense that Ron and Draco are the ones making waves in this quartet. I've always thought they were a lot a like, and they both have a way of inciting Hermione's anger (aka passion) whereas brooding Harry inspires Hermione's protective and nurturing instincts. I reiterate. She needs all 3. NAUGHTY me (heehee)!!! I'd like to see good girl Hermione struggle with her attraction (and hopefully love) for these 3 males. A forceful Hermione who eventually makes up her mind to have and submit to all 3 wizards would be wonderful too. Yeah, I know. I don't ask for much (heehee), but I've got the right author for the job. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

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Another good set of ideas...I like these too...whatever works with Rei's genuis would be fine!