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Wow OK Rei. This chapter was kinda intense, LOVED it. I like the one on one time with her and Harry...I like Harry's escalating aggressiveness in this chapter and I like Ron's expression of frustration and threat to share her. I don't care either way whether he follows through with the threat because even if he does she'll still be his and Harry's and I'm sure he'll remind her of that : ) It will be interesting to see how the threat will play out as far as Draco is concerned. The lust potion explanation works well. You know I love angst and drama so this story is only getting better and better for me. It'd be cool if you could explore why Ron and Harry are becoming so dark! and if they're having any conflicting feelings about how they're treating her...you know the psychology of it all, your speciality. As far as the whole implication of rape and non-con, this is a D/s fic as far as I'm concerned, Hermione entered into this relationship consensually and she knows she doesn't have to do anything she doesn't want to do. She's allowing Ron and Harry to punish, humiliate, and hurt her because she's OK with the power dynamic and is actually craving it. Being a dominant submissive, Our Hermione knows that her submission is a gift and that she can take it back and put a end to her humiliation if she wants to...maybe she will remind them of that later...but I hope she never puts an end to it : )

You've made my day yet again...

:::crazed sex smirk of satisfaction:::

Ron is soooooo evil! Poor Hermione she can't help it!.....sort of. I like how even though Harry is so rough with her he still cares for her...and Draco too! When will Ron come to his senses? And who gets to play with Hermione next?! Can't wait! thank you!

Hey Tarnished..

I just read your response to Rei's explanation. I hope you don't stop reading (or reviewing). Just get some popcorn, a recliner (or your vibrator, whatever works for you, hehe), and just enjoy the ride...you never know what Rei is gonna come up with so don't bow out just yet...

I just wanted to reiterate what Rei said about what looks like non-con or rape in a D/s relationship to an outside observer feels substantially different to the submissive who has the power (and the knowledge of her power) to allow any type of "forced" sex to occur. But, I understand also that for many people that line is too fine and dangerous. If the implication of rape is too strong for you and you have to stop reading here, I hope we can share and review another fic together somewhere else...

Okay, well I thought that my response to ReiRei would be my final review, but I guess I was wrong (blushes). Soft, I feel that I must respond to your comments. First of all, I enjoyed sharing your fic with you. Your reviews made me smile, and I hope that you had a similar experience reading mine. I feel sure that we will meet up again on the old review board because we share interests in the same HP ships according to your profile here. Additionally, we share an interest in D/s, but I seem to draw the line a bit sooner than you. Actually, I can tolerate the non-con better if Hermione has a longstanding history with the wizard (or wizards in question), but I don't respond well when the writer starts bringing in various and sundry wizards (that are no more than names in JKR's series) to have a go at Hermione unless the writer can establish some sort of emotional attachment to said wizard or wizards. Blaise Zabini would be an example of this. Even though he is a very minor character in the books (and non-existent in the films), many writers have been able to flesh him out and establish feelings (not necessarily love) between he and Hermione; so, I can find a sexual encounter with them enjoyable. I don't find fanfic sex enjoyable unless there are emotions between the participants. These emotions are once again not limited to love, but I prefer for the fics to end at that destination because I am a romantic at heart (blushes again). I can buy Hermione having fanfic sexual relationships with Ron, Harry, and Draco easily because of the canon emotions she shares with all 3--animosity with Draco, friendship with Harry, and friendship turning to eventual love with Ron. I also like these three male characters; that fact also obviously makes reading about them with Hermione easier. Anyway, that's where I stand on this. I will try (operative word here try) one more chapter. If I leave a review, it means I was able to get past this hurdle and continue reading. If you don't see a review, it means that I wasn't able to get past my own impediment and have discontinued reading. Either way, I HOPE that you enjoy this fic to the end.

This was quite a yummy chapter (pun intended). Thanks for including a scene with Dobby. I love the house elves in general and Dobby in particular. I also love the reference to S.P.E.W. In the books, Hermione was at her best trying to force knit caps and such onto the house elves (heehee). I LOVE Draco getting Hermione all messy and how he offered to "clean her up"--Sigh!!! Delicious moment there!!! I do believe Ms. Granger is in denial. She is accepting Draco's sexual advances for more than the express purpose of protecting Harry and Ron from Umbridge. She wants Draco, and I fear poor Draco is also confused. He thinks Hermione doesn't want Ron to "share" her with him and Harry, but alas I think that he's wrong. Hermione wants to ride all the horses on this "merry-go-round". And who can blame her with these 3 studs. Draco was sweet to offer her a monogamous relationship; although, I HOPE she declines this offer. Goody!!! Ron is jealous again. I can't wait to see his reaction in the next chapter. And, I echo other readers' thoughts. Hermione needs some time with the third wizard in her triumvirate. In other words, please let Harry play too. This was another wonderful chapter, and I eagerly await the next one.

Please update!! This story is really really good and I want to see what happens between Draco and Hermione.

oh yes...brillant way to start that sex scene...I love the image of hermione cleaning off Draco's fingers as foreplay...nice one. So the game is on...Ron is pissed and Draco is dropping hints...I can't believe Hermione said that only Draco makes her feel like that, was she lying or just talking in the heat of the moment or was that her heart talking? I can't wait to see what Ron is gonna do to her...Is gonna hurt her, humiliate her, and/or enlist Harry to deal out punishment? Inquiring and horny minds wanna know...lol

Is Draco offering to let her be his?! This is hot! Man so....when will there be more harry/Hermione action? Will it be rough? Or soft...*sighs* I always imagine him to be gente...nut this side of him is good too! And Ron...well we ALL knew how he would be like! Can't wait for the next chap!

i hate ron and harry, really.
i hope this ends like a dramione one :)

Awesoe Awesome! Loved the big orgy! It was great! Please do more of that!