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Has anyone seen spaceballs? It's not funny but I just reread my last bit and I thought of that princess chic. Nobody!!>!?!? heh. Well, I will update soon for this. I want to write a LONG chapter, oy! enjoy your weekend.

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Me me me...I've seen spaceballs like 5 times....and it is so funny! especially if you're a little tipsy or high :::ahem, or so I hear:::but yea, you had a little Princess Vespa going on there...hehe. It's crazy what can accidently sneak into our subconscious ain't it? Long chapter? If you didn't put out on the regular I would say you were being a tease! I gotta step away from the monitor now...must. interact. go outside. and not obsess over this fic. lol

oooooooooooooooooooooo...the shit is going down now! LOL...I love a pissed off Draco! This chapter was sweet, it's good to have a soft reprieve from the madness. But why do I feel myself growing jealous...Is it possible to get jealous of a fictional character? What's wrong with me? Oh yea, I forgot, you're a brilliant writer, it's all your fault! lol.

So Umbridge is coming, that's gonna fuck everything up...or will it? Is Umbridge into pain too? LOL. If you go there with Umbridge...I don't know..lol.

Oh, and thanks so much for your kind comments on my story...I don't know how you write so fast, that took me all day to write and I can't stop re-editing it...you must be a natural. Oh and I emailed your LJ, holla when you get a chance.

Hell hath no fury like a Malfoy scorned! Hermione's lying though right? Good chapter! *KISS*

Lilith

Well, that chapter was short and sweet. I'm glad that Ron has calmed down; however, I don't think the storm has passed. And now poor Draco is hurt, but I can understand his desire for revenge; since, Hermione basically stomped on his heart. There was nothing objectionable to me in this chapter; so, I guess that I have to keep reading and reviewing (heehee--what torture). I would have liked some details from that 3 hours that Hermione spent with Harry and Ron, but knowing you, sexier scenes will be right around the corner.

Love sex on the shower! It's gettin gvery twisted and interesting!

I have mixed feelings about this chapter. There were things that I absolutely loved, a thing that I'm willing to keep an open mind about, and a thing that I don't want to happen at all. First, I loved the fact that Harry got some alone time with Hermione, and that, she confided in him about the spilled potion. I loved Harry's stunt with the water jet. Yummy!!! I loved the moment when Ron and Harry took her using the water jet as the third stimulation point. Again yummy!!! I like how Harry and Ron think Draco is using Hermione, and I like how Draco thinks Harry and Ron are the ones using her. And the irony is all 3 boys care about her, and she is the one using them. This brings me to the thing that I'm willing to keep an open mind about. I think that Hermione having been affected by a lust potion is an interesting revelation, but I'm still disappointed by it. I want Hermione to have genuine affection for the 3 wizards the way they seem to have for her. But, that could still happen as the fic progresses; so, I'll just keep my fingers crossed. Lastly, PLEASE don't bring any other wizards into this. Let Ron's threat be just that--a threat, or let him pull back at the last minute when he sees how much he is hurting Hermione, or let Harry or Draco rein Ron in before Ron does something he regrets. I like D/s stories. I don't like rape fics, and I feel that's where this is headed. And I'm SORRY to say this, but if this wonderful story heads in that direction, I won't be able to continue to read or review it no matter how well it's written. Bottom line. Domination is sexy. Rape sickens me to my stomach. I don't mean for my final statements to be taken as flames, but I'm afraid you may interpret them that way. PLEASE don't. I'm just trying to be honest while at the same time not being cruel.

Tarnished : I do not feel you are flaming my writing. I do try to work within a medium that interests myself as well as the reader. Rape is not something that can happen, when all the participants are willing. I understand your desire to see all three boys share a relationship with her, and a love affair. And I suppose I could write that, but I personally dont feel its very realistic. People get to jealous or needy or whatever. The is primarily a Challenge Fic for my buddy Soft, that details specifically that I make Ron dominant, paired with Harry or Draco if I prefer, and then whatever else I like. Soft knows me, I love angst, so it will veer in that direction. I cannot promise anything, but I do remind you that I put ALL WARNINGS, on this fic.

Hermione is a Dominant submissive. The very nature of being a submissive tends to veer towards humiliation, degradation, pushing boundaries that others would see as "rape, Gangbangs, or potentially abusive relationships". Now, whether or not I see that as healthy or good is irrelevant. It will be in my fic, because this is a Challenge Fic, designed for a certain tastebud.


As a writer it is my job to provide the reader (IMHO) with the sensations of the charachters, and motivations of others, so I can tell a story that involves you.

If Hermione feels that she is being "raped." It may a be descriptor designed to install the reader with the desperation of her emotions, that desire to stop, or push forward, etc. Forced to do something that she doesnt want, then that could be "what it feels like." but not necessarily what it is.

The nature of the challenge is to demonstrate that although Hermione is submissive she is still in control. If Hermione is not submissive than I am missing the whole point of the Challenge, I am sorry if that upsets you, but if you like, you can write a challenge detailing exactly what you like and someone may come along and write it or maybe I can pick it up, if I have time. However, first and foremost this is if not anything else, designed for Soft's request.


Thank you for reading as far as you have and I appreciate the reviews. Reirei!

Rei Rei, Thank You for not taking my review as a flame. I didn't think you would, but when you send something into cyberspace you never know how it will be viewed. One thing I feel that I must clarify is this: I wasn't implying that you condoned rape fics. I also realize rape in fanfic is subjective. What disturbs me might not bother others. Additionally, I realize a writer is writing to touch our emotions--ALL of them, but I just can't bring myself to read what I perceive as rape. I also realize that you placed all warnings on this fic. I had also read Soft Obsidian 74's challenge request. That request only included Ron, Harry, and Draco. I assumed (incorrectly it seems) that all the scenes covered in that warning would include them and only them with Hermione. Because I thought that, I thought making a plea to you to include only them wouldn't violate Soft's challenge which was the last thing that I wanted to do. It is HER fic, and what you write should please HER. If the fic had been exclusively the 3 wizards named in the challenge, I would have happily continued reading this fic whether they all ended up in a relationship or not. I didn't think that it was going to end up with all of them in a relationship at fic's end, but it would have been icing on the cake; so, I had to make a plug for it. Additionally, I think it would make an interesting fic to see all the boys struggle with their respective feelings for each other and Hermione within the confines of a D/s relationship. But you and Soft don't see it my way, and it is HER challenge; so, I will quietly bow out of this fic's plot and leave this as my final review. Thanks for the fun ride while it lasted.

Poor Hermione. I hope Ron doesn't really let her get used too much. Hopfully Hermione won't be broken by this.

Great updates. Looking forward to more! =D