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for Lonely Sacrifice

by StarKneazle

person Anon
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Sonal
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This definitely requires a sequal! I'd love to know where you take it. Length was worth it! :D
person rw18
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think the only word that can describe this is FANTASTIC.
I loved every aspect of it, I took time reading it, savouring it and I am so glad I did, must be one of the best stories I have ever read.
Well done...I just want to know what happens next? Have you got a sequel planned?
HG295
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schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
'His Dark Mark seemed to glow in the sunlight.' EEK, what does it mean when a Death Eater's Dark Mark appears to glow in sunlight? Is this a foreshadowing of things to come in the sequel? I look forward to finding out the answers.

Beautifully written, I would love to read a sequel!

Take it easy and have fun writing!
person luvhp
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so sorry to see that you have not received very many hits for this one as it's absolutely FABULOUS!
At first I was a bit lost at the veery beginning as you had it jumping, but by the end it all seemed to wrap up just fine. Ron was a right bastard in this one, doesn't bother me at all though :)
For this being your first fic, and your baby, I think you did exceptionally well!!!!
Sad but beautiful. If you do write a sequel, I would surely love to read it.
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Twisted
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
basically amazing.
loved every second of it.
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i though it to be a bit romantic and id enjoy a sequel!
person ocard
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow.
that was amazing =]
didnt like the mean, bastard ron, but everything else was spectacular!!
definitely go for a sequel!!
person reirei
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the story. I wish it was longer, simply because I would have enjoyed seeing the trials of the seventh year, of when Draco was a spy, and the betrayal scene when Heremione realized he went back to being a Deatheater. It confused me the abrupt switch, but overall the emotions were all in the right place, the sex was great, and the angst made my tummy surge with delight. I give it an A.

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