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December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i really want to see what comes out of this!!!
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February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE update
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DANG
It's ROn, must be, Love RON!
It's ROn, must be, Love RON!
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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Firstly, I love it. That said, it needs a lot of improvement. Your sex scenes are nice, you're very descriptive, but I felt it lacked a particular drive. I would suggest something erotic in its own right, such as a shower scene, an outdoor scene, maybe with a bath scene (Prefect's bathroom?), and a developing plot that manifests itself as the story advances. I will be waiting for more from you. You are a very talented author and it would be a shame to see your talent go to waste.
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November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start. Can't wait to read more. I hope Harry gets a chance to use his big, thick eight-incher and find out how tight Ron is!