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I love that Lily was the Dominant! I love any pairing where the girl doms and the boy's submissive. ^_^

ok... well character are way ooc but it's still a good story. But I don't see the problem here Draco should be able to tell which one the real one is, they know they are each other's mates. (well Harry doesn't but all the adults do) further more since they know Draco is his mate why not just have him mate with him? Why would he die? Didn't you say he could choose his mate if his true mate never showed? And what happened to Draco killing everyone around Harry once he learned Harry was his mate? Suddenly he's just plaset and good to watch? It's an entertaining story but your not staying true to even your rules. Stay consistent. And it's already been established that your characters are Occ, though you had Harry right before he transformed than he just turned into a whinny well neko, but Harry is not from and anime he is set to destroy a dark wizard he's not helpless. And you've seemed to stick well to Lucius's charter but than you had him come TEACH at the school, him and his wife. something that would be so far below them they'd never even let it cross their minds. If they wanted to go to the school they would just go, but not teach!
I'm afraid you may take this as a flame, please don't it's really not. I'm sorry if I seemed harsh your story is good just inconsistent.

I love this! XD You're wonderful, and this is fantastic. :D Update soon, please.
-cherishmoiraparamour.

oh boy plural potters, i can't wait for more.
and that "mine" had me falling off my chair,
rolling on the floor! i haven't had a fic do
that to me in a while. congrats for that.
serpensortia

Very awesome chapter ... well written ... It has me on tenterhooks waiting for the next chapter ... keep up your spectacular work ... oh and when will Harry finally realize about Draco? ... I'm dying with curiosity

Sooo need chapter 6! I hope all the Harrys listened!

I totally love this story, as this is so funny and interesting! The chemistry between Sirius and Serveus would be...expected, as well as an obsessive Draco and running Harry!!!

BTW, how does rational Draco think about his inheritance and his action?

OMG!!! ahaha i can't stop laughing. And the scene on the train was fucking funny, them all screaming and silly draco, then him being all cute with his "mine?" tee heee heee!!! So many harrys!!!! Loving the story can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

Hi, um a rather interesting problem on how a potion and a rather heroic Harry leads to a frenzy of multi- Potters. This will no doubt leave us all wondering what is coming next. Also on another note you are quite right about Draco's scary appearance. Pointed teeth and a wild-eyed look bordering on insanity certainly is scarier than a one-eyed purple people eater, or any of Hagrid's pet monsters. When the potion took effect it was rather funny how some of the duplicate hands pinch, pulled, or just grabbed whomever they came in contact with almost immediately. Hopefully the real Harry will be found by his true mate before you finish this rather wicked tale. So I'm in for the whole enchilada, and please continue.

yesssssssssssssssssss!! lol