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for Falling in a snakes arms,

by JaceDamian23

person jjui
schedule July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
right
person anessavanella
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It got anti-climatic at the second chapter, I was practically rolling my eyes because I was confused. It felt like things were missing, a lot of details were missing.Please post the 3rd chapter so I know what's going on. cause it felt like you instantaneously made harry the bad guy, something's gonna lead to that. It was just too upfront. Just sayin' and this is not a flame just constructive criticism [anessavanella@aim.com]
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Like it. Hate Potter. Kinda corny character, taking out the jerk in him looks real good!!!
person Anon
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what?
person Abi
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh....*tears* I feel so bad for Ron right now. I love Draco/Ron fics. Good story..
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thankyou for the feedback hun. glad you like it. Unfortnately I am having major writers block for this story. I have lots of Ron and Draco stories though. Check them out.
COnfessions is my newest one.

angela