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schedule October 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is the first time someone tried to make ron the good guy,
schedule October 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this story is crazy would love to see what happens.
person reirei
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the storyline alot. Very angsty and fun. Great dialogue. Very believable in a strange way.


Good work. Side note: Obviously a beta would help, but fuck them if they dont understand you without the commas. NOT a criticism.

Oh and its knew - not knew, luv.

Anywho, keep writing.

person Anon
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like it. Beautiful angst and I dont like M/M usually but I was intrigued! Good work!