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November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story has a lot of potential to be very good. You have mistakes, but don't we all? One main thing...Sevrous should be Severus. There were other spelling error's, but that's the main one. He's a main character, after all :) I do want to read more, though. I'm wondering how Seamus and Blaise will fit into the picture...*ponders* ::MV::
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November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah, what are ron and draco up to, cause I know I want to know!
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November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok so, woaw! That was freakin hott! Loved the whole scenario! And I do recomment TOP Draco! SQUEE! Keep the hotness, loved it dirty!