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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story line!
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can i beta for you... this is a great story but the grammar sucks (no offense) and it hurts the story a bit so please let me beta for you.
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December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story.
Um, in one part you acideantaly put T-short instead of T-shirt, not sure if you noticed that or not.
I think Remus, Lucious or Kingsly Shackelbot(spelled wrong probably) would make a good co-worker for Severus.
Um, in one part you acideantaly put T-short instead of T-shirt, not sure if you noticed that or not.
I think Remus, Lucious or Kingsly Shackelbot(spelled wrong probably) would make a good co-worker for Severus.