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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just started this story and want to know more about them and this world you created.
Please email me updates atpoohnation74@yahoo.com thank you.
Please email me updates atpoohnation74@yahoo.com thank you.
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just a review to let you know I'm still waiting and hoping ;-)
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November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
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November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! hahaha, I bet that that's not the only surprise Draco and Severus are in for! As for the pairs... Blaise/Charlie or Blaise/Bill (or both^^), and Percy/Barty Jr. (they sound good together), and then just for a twist, Regulus/Neville... and I thought that you had said that Oliver had died already because Mist killed him... but if not then I guess he could go with Regulus/Neville... and I thought that Mist was married to Regulus but maybe Neville (and Oliver) could be his slaves... and he ends up liking them more then Mist.... maybe. Anyways, awesome job, keep writing more yummies!
~Misery
(could you e-mail when you up-date? wpjn_sanderson@hotmail.com)
~Misery
(could you e-mail when you up-date? wpjn_sanderson@hotmail.com)
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November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You said in Chapter 3 that Mist killed Oliver while Barty Jr. was away--leaving blood all over the room. So, that being the case, Oliver cannot come back unless there's a necromancer around somewhere?
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November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As long as thwe non-negotiable pairs stay the same, I don't care who else is paired. Just update soon. I want action! ;)
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November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An update again. That's great. I understand you can't keep that up.
I love your writing, but the reaction of Severus at the screams in the forest (ch.2) and at the introduction of Harry (ch.3) is strange (explaining the earlier communication between Draco and Severus with lipreading is possible). Isn't Severus deaf? I ask this because I find him being deaf, mute, trapped within himself (and partly broken?) interesting (a lot even) but should be consisting.
I love your writing, but the reaction of Severus at the screams in the forest (ch.2) and at the introduction of Harry (ch.3) is strange (explaining the earlier communication between Draco and Severus with lipreading is possible). Isn't Severus deaf? I ask this because I find him being deaf, mute, trapped within himself (and partly broken?) interesting (a lot even) but should be consisting.
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November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow oh wow and um where was i?.......WWWWWWOOOOOOWWWWWWW!!!!!! so far it is amazing. when you update could you email me to let me know that this amazing story has been updated? if so then thank you and if not....oh well. update soon *kisses*
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November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow i love your story. Just one thing had me curious, if Severus is deaf and mute then how was the bombshell dropped on him? Unless he read Harry's lips and Draco didn't mouth out the last part, just thought it. Am i being to analytical?
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An update so soon! That's great. Love to read more, especially what happened to poor severus (my favorite character) and Draco between tmhose twon months.