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by luvhp

person blondiexoxo
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far
Hope u update soon.
person reirei
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Rubs hands together* Ahhhhh that was a sexy little last bit. Keep it up!
person curlyq2713
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh, good story. update soon please!
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you've really outdone yourself with this one! The banter between H&D in this is SO sexy!! You've got to get them together asap... stupid 3minute man Ronald. That was funny btw, because I could really picture Ron not being able to last, it just fits his personality somehow lol. I have a feeling this is going to be a hot one, I really just can't get over how sexy you've made Draco. You've somehow managed to make him friendly but still the bad boy we all know and love. Can't wait for more of this one, I am getting quite the list of fanfiction I am keeping up with lately, I think it's taking over my life lol!
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now you know you wrong for dissing Ron like that!!!
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for the next chapter
person jaimelee
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! Okay, those last 2 chapters were just hilarious! I love the story so far. Please let me know when you udpate. I can't wait until Hermione and Draco get together and Ron find out.
person Deana
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it, please update!
person Anon
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update I want to see where this is going
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was cute! I almost thought you were a bit harsh to Ron, but Draco is SO sexy so it kinda makes up for it!

~Talon Longbottom