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for The 'L' Word

by darkpyroangel06

schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was sweet. I would have trouble being in a realtionship without the "L" would, but I like how you worked out the problem, maybe one day he will be able to really say it.
person Lizz
schedule February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to review and didn't feel like signing in... I'm lazy, I know.

That was so sweet. It made me sigh, it almost made me cry... which is actually very hard to do. I'd give it a 10 out of 5... yes, I said ten out of five. I love your stories, I really do. I have your profile favorited to my web browser, along with my other favorite authors, for easy finding.
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. I love (excuse pun) the structure - the way you've made most of it a letter. I'm not usually into Snarry but I DO like this. Keep it coming :D
person kati
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't usually read oneshots, but I know of your good reputation as a writer, so I thought I should give it a look. It was really worth it, actually! Well-written oneshots are obviously written in a different way to multi-chaptered fics (much like novels and short stories) with different goals in mind when written. I think that this was very well-constructed and the characterisation was very in-character and down-to-earth. It seemed like a plausible Harry and was actually fairly faithful to the book-Harry persona. (Laugh) I never thought that Snape could be so understanding! How sweet... It makes me hope that Harry can eventually say the 'L' word and (on a personal note) that you and your boyfriend work things out. Good luck!
person LamaPie
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very nice! cute as well! XD
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww... that was so... I'd say adorable, but that makes it sound kiddy. It's great, even if I can't find the right adjective. "I 'L' word you"... just aww... ^_^
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*tears* So...Beautiful *sob*
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, kinda sweet. Good one *thumbs up*
person puccachu
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
simply lovely
really enjoyed it
now put severus in harrys place...NOW Lol
jp juss being silly
its interesting to see this side of harrys
i love it
thank you
oxoxox
person Hine
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww... I "L" word this story. And I'm totally gonna use the idea in an RP if that's ok. XD.

~HINE