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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap this is just soooo good!!!!
Want more, more, more please? Keep up the good work!
//LoveGD
Want more, more, more please? Keep up the good work!
//LoveGD
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter-- but it was a major tease. Draco didn't reveal anything and No one kissed!
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I am truly enjoying this story. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next, with Harry and Draco.
Please update chapter 4 soon. ^_^
Please update chapter 4 soon. ^_^
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think you should keep writing this! I'm really enjoying it and want to se what happens in the future!!
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January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My goodness...an author who can ACTUALLY write a story about a sport, even though it's Quidditch, and make it plausible! :-)
You're doing alright to me, you must love sports in one form or another to be able to be so detailed with this. After all, I rarely see stories like this in this section [H & D], I think I read one but it talked about Quidditch in small detail, it focused mainly just the 2 characters.
Anyway, you have another reader on the prowl on this story, but just to let you know I won't review as much but I will still be keeping an eye out for this story.
Oh and another thing, I love your subtle sense of humor in this story, DON'T LOSE IT [in reference to Harry taking a nosedive onto the Potions classroom floor].
We have enough angst but not enough humor to balance out the stories I've realized.
nuff said...
You're doing alright to me, you must love sports in one form or another to be able to be so detailed with this. After all, I rarely see stories like this in this section [H & D], I think I read one but it talked about Quidditch in small detail, it focused mainly just the 2 characters.
Anyway, you have another reader on the prowl on this story, but just to let you know I won't review as much but I will still be keeping an eye out for this story.
Oh and another thing, I love your subtle sense of humor in this story, DON'T LOSE IT [in reference to Harry taking a nosedive onto the Potions classroom floor].
We have enough angst but not enough humor to balance out the stories I've realized.
nuff said...
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
no! you're doing great!!! ^_^
i love your harry and draco!
update soon please! great fic so far!
i love your harry and draco!
update soon please! great fic so far!
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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a good story so far. I think Harry is Oblivious, but hasn't he always been, lol. Draco is a take charge kind of guy, I think your playing up their characters good. Can't wait for the next update.
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg please write another chapter soon i love this story
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nah it's not too sappy at all! Great chapter and I'm so glad you've updated! I like the mix for their team, can't wait to see the first games and how Harry and Ron will deal with being on opposite teams and the somewhat confusing feelings that Harry will be experiencing in the near future! Haha! I hope that Malfoy doesn't lose his complete 'asshole-attitude' straight after a confession of affection though - always annoys me when that happens, his aloof exterior is such an intergral part of himself....
Ah well :P Write it how you want it! I'm sure I'll love it regardless! Eagerly awaiting another update!
Hella
Ah well :P Write it how you want it! I'm sure I'll love it regardless! Eagerly awaiting another update!
Hella
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello, dear. I just realized that this was your story. I'd read chapter 1 ages ago and forgot to review. Then I matched up your name from your reviews on my story with this one, and went, "Holy crap! I love that story!"
So, here I am reviewing. ^_^ Keep up the good work on this one. I don't really think either of them are too obvious. Draco could easily revert to being a bit of a jerk and claim that the team couldn't afford Harry missing a practice because he had to redo a pretty basic potion. And Harry's the type to thank someone if they've been being nice enough and saved him from severe humiliation or whatnot.
So, here I am reviewing. ^_^ Keep up the good work on this one. I don't really think either of them are too obvious. Draco could easily revert to being a bit of a jerk and claim that the team couldn't afford Harry missing a practice because he had to redo a pretty basic potion. And Harry's the type to thank someone if they've been being nice enough and saved him from severe humiliation or whatnot.