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April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww yay! its funny cause i was just looking at this story like literally two days ago. i love the story so far!! i hope draco and harry get together soon even if by accident lol. and are ron/hermoine never gonna be friends with harry again bc thats dumb considering hermoine was always about the peace and now shes causing the drama with her dumb ginger bf. lol jk but seriously
oh and are you gonna do anything with blaise and another character>???
xoxo keep it up i feel like i'm hanging on your every word lol ;p
oh and are you gonna do anything with blaise and another character>???
xoxo keep it up i feel like i'm hanging on your every word lol ;p
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April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 6!!! Sooo close! Oh Seamus you have bad timing!
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April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i can't tell you how much i really love this story. i know that you are entitled to a 'real life' but please update soon. i'm loving every aspect of it so far and really hope harry gives ron what for soon.
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April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very Cute!!!!!!! Continue soon. Please
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
about # 3...
I liked the idea of putting them together in the RoR, so they could
be comfortable/relaxed around each other, but what about them
getting to KNOW one another?
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about # 4...
I'm glad Draco was the better man in this chapter than Ron and
Harry sees it.
I, also, like the comraderie you're showing between the Banshees.
Something a lot of Football teams I see should be doing. :-)
..oh, by the way, I just had a thought I've haven't seen anyone do
this yet in a fic when they 'try' to write about Quidditch. But, since
your story is Quidditch-focused...could you have the Banshees
do a type of Victory lap around the Pitch, when they have to do a game in
the future that could 'make or break' their status in the field?
That's just a thought to put in a future chapter, since I've yet seen it
done.
PS: Personally I thought the Quidditch part was a good length...not too short
or long-winded.
I liked the idea of putting them together in the RoR, so they could
be comfortable/relaxed around each other, but what about them
getting to KNOW one another?
***********
about # 4...
I'm glad Draco was the better man in this chapter than Ron and
Harry sees it.
I, also, like the comraderie you're showing between the Banshees.
Something a lot of Football teams I see should be doing. :-)
..oh, by the way, I just had a thought I've haven't seen anyone do
this yet in a fic when they 'try' to write about Quidditch. But, since
your story is Quidditch-focused...could you have the Banshees
do a type of Victory lap around the Pitch, when they have to do a game in
the future that could 'make or break' their status in the field?
That's just a thought to put in a future chapter, since I've yet seen it
done.
PS: Personally I thought the Quidditch part was a good length...not too short
or long-winded.
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aweeesome story! this is definetly one of my favorites
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February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww... Harry finally realizes. A mid-air kiss would have caused multiple heart attacks in the crowd! Great to see an update!
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February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter. It showed a little about how Draco and Harry feel about each other and how Harry feels about his old friends. I cant wait to see more of this fic.
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God!!!! That was so freaking awesome. You have got to write more and quickly. I have not read a story that good in a long time. Well other than the two I am currently waiting on to be updated. I really like your style, and you keep them in character, yet allow them to develop as people. Not many people can do that.
And I love the way Harry is realizing what a child Ron is. Ron always pissed me off. And Hermonie, don't really like her either. And I love how Snape and Lupin are getting along, maybe you should hook them up...just kidding. But it would make things more interesting for the team.
Please continue writing, I think I am going to go find your other stories and read them now.
Later
And I love the way Harry is realizing what a child Ron is. Ron always pissed me off. And Hermonie, don't really like her either. And I love how Snape and Lupin are getting along, maybe you should hook them up...just kidding. But it would make things more interesting for the team.
Please continue writing, I think I am going to go find your other stories and read them now.
Later
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh holy moly!!! I sooo need chapter 5!!! I was thinking Harry had finally realized his crush on Draco but looks like he pushed it back!