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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gonna love this,I can tell....I like your style and the premise is so yummy! You use the word anyway too much, maybe get a beta?? other than that, I'm really psyched about your story and will be checking for updates.
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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great and original premise. I'm very interested where this will go. Just a word of advise though, leave out "anyway," and such things when starting a sentence. An example would be when Harry's thinking about everyone's discussion over breakfast and then he was in the stands. "Anyway" sounds like you had lost your train of thought and were just getting back to it.
Update soon!
Update soon!
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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more please!
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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like!
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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start! I love this story idea-- I'm really bummed that Chrissy hasn't continued hers yet. PLEASE continue. I really want to see Harry and Draco on the same team! (Love the team names and professors running them!)
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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA! perfect!
You definitely need to continue! this is great. I want more!
BTW I love the idea of Luna being a team captain. Is there maybe a chance for Severus/Remus? *puppy eyes*
Oh I can't wait for the second chapter. Oh the suspense.
You definitely need to continue! this is great. I want more!
BTW I love the idea of Luna being a team captain. Is there maybe a chance for Severus/Remus? *puppy eyes*
Oh I can't wait for the second chapter. Oh the suspense.
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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I totally agree with everything AMIYOM wrote! I mean everything! tehe