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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is turning out so good! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!!! Sooo need chapter 3!!!
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Luv this story! just a few "tips" Less internal thoughts, more conversation amoungst the characters. Describe the surroundings just a little more. and, on a more personal preference point, more Quidditch!, But other that that I truly luv this and you show great promise.
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think Banshees is the perfect name for a team with Harry and Draco. LOL
GREAT AMAZING chapter!
Only one question: what's with Ron? You mentioned him at the beginning of the chapter, but then time flew by quickly while the chapter (really quick, I might say) and you didn't mention anything about him anymore or how he behaves towards Harry. And no, i don't think Harry's sappy or oblivious and No, I don't think Draco is obvious, either.
GREAT AMAZING chapter!
Only one question: what's with Ron? You mentioned him at the beginning of the chapter, but then time flew by quickly while the chapter (really quick, I might say) and you didn't mention anything about him anymore or how he behaves towards Harry. And no, i don't think Harry's sappy or oblivious and No, I don't think Draco is obvious, either.
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i want more now!
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Too cute! It's great!
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sappy is good! so is Obvilivon fo a while. Im enjoying this, its beliveable! How many chaps you planning? cause maybe a bit more detail in bits would be good, unless your planning to keep it short
update soon!
L_C
update soon!
L_C
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the progression. But then again I'm a slow burn type of person. I like that they didn't go all out and snog each other yet. Just keep inching it along and explore some of the awkwardness and complications that a friendship or more may pose for them and it'll be fine. Looking forward to seeing where you take this and more importantly, how you get there...good job.
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is great! I like it best when draco is really hesitant with his flirting for a while but lets his attraction slip every once and a while in really obvious ways. When it comes to Harry he should be really naive and stubbornly deny his feeling for draco until he finally gives in. Great job and keep up the good work! :)
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww. The boys are so smitten! They're flirting and they don't even know it! Please don't make us wait long!