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for Slanaighear Ofrail An Seangharra

by pittwitch

person ccino49
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, once again. That Aideen is something else. She's man mad. I like orrs, she's nice. I think Snape is taken with her too. Hope they become verrry close, and soon. Keep writing pitt, you know I love what you do.
ccino
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That Aideen's a minx, isn't she? Funny! She might be getting her head bitten off sometime soon.

Seem's Orra and Sev have quite a lot in common, from profession to temperament. Could there be a little spark there? Hmmm.
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now I want to know what the bad memories that Orra has are. Is Snape going to use his specialty on her? How will she take her mind being invaded? Will she even know since she is muggle? Did she have a husband that died? Is that why she flipped out over the t-shirt? I am intriged by the women's healing method, and am interested in learning more about it.

Sansa
person ccino49
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch2. Well, you got me good and proper. What are these women? How did they know Albus, and who is Sean?

Ch3. What a curious trio. And Snape in tidy whities? Purleeze. C
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha! Snape is risen!

So Aideen is 'sneaky' and likes men a lot - could be a Slytherin type of love interest. But Orra sounds intriguing too with her well-guarded past. Hmmm. It's going to be interesting.
person misslala
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dumbledore's letter is very interesting. I want to know why he went to the women! hehe How did they heal him? heh heh heh. :D
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the way you tied in your earlier oneshot (the red & gold feather in the Shrieking Shack) with this.

I'm interested to know where this is going - Irish (practising) Catholic witches are new to me, though the collision of Celtic and Roman cultures has never quite settled down, so it does make sense. I wonder how they are going to help Severus? Of course, I hope they heal him, but a side of me is hoping at least one of them will drive him mad in the process. Lol. What can I say - I love the snark!

Lovely writing; I'm cheering for more.
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, you've got to love a special anti-Nagini potion. And a portkey - nice one; I haven't seen that used in a post-DH story yet.

It's a shame you can't post sound files along with stories - I'd love to hear the music you describe so beautifully.

So we've got a living Snape, an intriguing set-up and an appeal to my Celtic heritage (always works, that last one) - now we just need another chapter!
person ccino49
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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person misslala
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha I don't know about helpful... but you're welcome :D

Interesting start you have here... let's see how the three women deal with Snape...