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for Slanaighear Ofrail An Seangharra

by pittwitch

person Marbil
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was right, Kingsley will have to be obliviated. I wonder if Aideen will pursue anything further with Kingsley?
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I am so glad you updated!

You
person AeraVale
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey really nice story, only half way through so far, but it has great promise!

So you use a lot of gaeilge in your writing which I take to mean you're Irish?? Can you speak it or do you just know the odd phrase? An bhfuil tu ina chonai i nEire? :D

Anyway, cool idea for a story, I like it a lot so far...

xx Aera
person Marbil
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I read this earlier while my husband was getting ready to take me out to dinner, amazingly he was ready before I got to write my review.

I enjoyed Kellyn picking Bill's brain about his brothers. Charlie would be the only good match for her. She'd strangle Percy in no time, Ron is already taken, and once George recovers there would be nothing but trouble every time they got together.

Even better was what happened after she fell asleep. Poor Severus, I bet both his balls and his bladder were aching when she finally came out of the bathroom.
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol at asking Bill if he has any brothers. Is Fleur on the scene in this, or 'as she vaneeeshed.

I'd find the portrait thing quite odd as well - they've got a lot to take in with all this new information. Update soon.
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay another chapter!! I was almost afraid you had given up on this story. I hope by burying the Death Eater robes, Orra will be successful.

I had to laugh that Dumbledore wouldn
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw Pittwitch, I had been meaning to read this for some time now and I finally did! Yay! And of course now I am hooked!

First off I just have to tell you, I
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked the pace of that; the urgency was making my heart skip. Lol at 'whore-crucks', and it amused me that that dire Hogwarts song was good for something at last.

I love the blend of Celtic and Wizarding magic going on, neither understanding the other's ways. Very nice - thanks!
person ccino49
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love that Kerryn is a mortician, all that gore, lovely. And the
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, I'm a bit worried about the whole back-to-Hogwarts possibilities! And I hope he's going to be all right.

Loved the itchy arse curse, and what's all this Rick O'Shea business then (lol, I know somebody called that)?

Kellyn in the morgue though - eww, sooner her than me!

Lots and lots of strands to tease out for the future in this chapter, and I think Snape's got a bit of a soft spot for Orra already.