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Very intriguing story, I'm sorry to see that you seem to have abandoned it. I'd really like to know what's going on.... ;-).

I see no problem with them using Orra's mother's healing ritual for Bill Weasley's scars. It can't make them any worse and it may do them some good.

I'm glad to see that you've gotten back to this story, I missed it. Good chapter, I reread the previous one and this is a good follow-up to their dreams. Will anything come of them sharing the same bed? As for Kellyn and Murphy, I'm more interested in Severus getting laid but not adverse to seeing Murphy get what he deserves.

So far, hun, I'm enjoying this story! HAHA! I can't believe that Orra thinks Snape is gay! Well, she's going to get quite the surprise, eh? I'm hoping he allows himself to follow his growing feelings for her, and she for him. But what of the three Fae goddesses who are meddling about, hm? I wonder if they've a lot more planned for the three 'healers' and our Potions Master? I can't wait to see!

Yay, an update! That Kellyn is something else. I'll be looking forward to see what the sign means. I'll also be looking for a quick update! Hope you had nice Holidays. They sure went quick.

Sansa

Wow Pitt, I didn't realize I made that much of an impression or had any influence at all. But you're the one who got me thinking and them the thinking got me looking up all of that on Google, so I got a lot out of it and learned something profound to boot.

"Orra is completely upset by Lucius' Mark. It isn't like the first one she saw (and I think you know whose she saw first) and it isn't like Snape's. She glimpsed things from Lucius' mind when she touched it and there's another mystery."
I got that from what I read.

"Why would Lucius' Occlumency shields be down? She saw Narcissa alongside him and thought she was Marked. Orra is trying to figure out what that Dark Mark really is. Until now, she truly believed it to be some way Albus marked his men. She is upset by more than the Apparition. WAR - Wait and read."

I knew it wasn't just the Apparition that upset her to the point of throwing up, she's very confused by what she saw and very frightened too. I think she's seen a lot more when she checked Lucius's mark than you've let on yet. She's probably much better with 'the sight' than Trelawney ever was.

"I'm sorry for working so slowly. And, I apologize for the lack of lemon aid in all this heat."

I can wait, I know they will be coming. It is in the future.

"I know you like the word play, so I ask you: How do you think Orra would interpret Dumbledore telling her that Snape was his man?"

I know that you never write Snape as gay and I've never seen you write any Bi so I think she takes it as I do, that Snape was his trusted lieutenant immersed in the enemy's camp.

My newest thoughts about Snape and Dumbledore are about how DD manipulated and used him. I've never felt that Snape felt more than puppy love for Lily and he probably still had a bit of that left when he found out that 'He Who I Find Most Tedious & Tiresome' had targeted Lily and her family because of the prophecy. That caused him to feel guilt which was multiplied 100 fold when Lily was killed. Dumbledore, in all his Machiavellian splendor, knew just how to manipulate that to his own use. He had already used it when Snape first came to him and after that Halloween night he manipulated Snape into thinking he had an undying love for Lily and deserved to feel all that guilt over her death. When he wanted Snape to do something unpleasant, and it was almost always unpleasant, he just twisted the knife of guilt in Snape's heart.

I a bit confused by the events in this chapter, but I'm sure all will be clear with the next chapter. Did Minerva and Bill warn the other two women not to mention Severus at all when Kingsley comes around? They need to keep Severus's survival from him until he sees the memories and they can convinve him of Snape's loyaties and what they all owe him.

I know Lucius is a sympathetic character in this because you told me so and I feel that Narcissa is also (besides, she really owes Snape a big one because of the Unbreakable Vow); but I'm not so sure where Draco's loyalties lie yet.

The cognac was obviously a message to Lucius that he survived, it's the marks and her reaction to them and what she told Bill that I'm really wondering about.

Love love love the Irish touch! I haven't read something that actually made me laugh so hard I cried in quite a while. Thanks for that.

Hi, I'm loving the story!!!!! Very creative.

I'm Irish born and bred. if ya need help translating anything send me a mail and I'll do my best. (the oirsh is a bit rusty at times!! LOL!) danni@dublin.ie