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for You Change My Mind

by AkashaTheKitty

person ichiruki
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, @ ch2 ok so I don't know how this will play out, title is vague which is nice considering I really do who's mind is going to do the changing! Nice start to the interrogation/prisoner thing as well, if you really want info beating the bloody pulp out of someone isn't going to usually work, especially when you hear real life interrogators and the like talk about how they bring a sandwich or pack of smokes in to help build towards the relationship between detainee and captor so that they want to talk to the person. So kudos on chapter 2, as I liked it's believability.

person ichiruki
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't remember if I reviewed ch 3 but what the hell here's 3 and 4, wow I'm growing more and more curious as to what the hell they want from her, like if they are going to try and turn her...really don't see that happening...ah, I'm on the edge of my seat! That or they want Harry, and really where is everybody did they think she died? I've got questions and now with ch 4 some interesting sexual tension lol. Good luck falling asleep again Hermione (LOL!)
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is another lovely story of yours of course! Cmon, do you really expect me to say anything other than 'I love it!' Because well, I love it!! I don't know if I can wait 6 more days, especially after that last bit. Meanie!
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I dont know why but I get the feeling that this fic is not gonna be sunny days in spain. But I know Im still gonna be hooked by your brill writting.

Ok Im ready bring it on I can take what ever you are gonna throw at me with in this fic. Just be gentel
person boyarina
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uber nice!
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i want to know why she doesnt like the sweater too!i love the chap!
person Anon
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow i love it and more pleasE!!!!!
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
must need more!
person Velvet
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm intrigued. Please do continue to update!