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spells of fucking merlin thanks for chapter 6 and 7 they were amazing

Fantastic chapter; I love it. I'm starting to get a little anxious about how close this story is to chapter 10. I don't want it to end.

damnit please someone write me a happpy ending for draco and hermoine do people think its funny to see other people copletly engrossed in a love story and then some evil people write it so they dont even end up together i have a very long rant onthe end of dracos return i was so sad damn it people for me try to get it right they are in love they hate and loive eacthother why cant you let me have that in less than 1 week i have become OBSSESED with hermoine and draco let me put it this way i am bi-sexua; o have never been aroused really by a man and now for the frist time throught reading these things i am having these feelings ive never understood before yes i am married and i was always kinda shelterd in giving myself away and totally being devoured i wanted toi devour my spouse but not the other way around what good writters have made me see is that it is awesome to have sex with a person you love passionate and deep and loning and hard with ownership yes im crazy yes i just said all of this so damn it for my embarssing admission with my sister is more than sure to see some one give me a happy fucking ending where draco is fucking hermoines brains out into the sunset and they live happily ever after and have lots and lots of babies i know thats not very belivable but hey its a bunch of wizards please quite toying with me this is a big outlet for me i gusse i really identified to it when a friend insisted that i read hermonie and draco stories it really stuck and do you know why it reminded me excatly the nature of me and my husabands relashonhship sure theres always been passion but i have never walked into the room and ignored my gagrelexes before i read these stories i never thought there was a part of me like that i enjoy being a slut for my husband and ill be damned if these stories are messed up ill write my own and i swear it will be bad im a shit writter so please ms kitty take pitty on me i dont htink my friend who is also writtng a story will please please please give me a happy ending with sex i am begging i know dark is your style so hey i just wanna say please please let it end with one hell of a 69 party between hermoine and draco god knowns i cant talk my prude husband into fucking me like an animal so i need these stories to pretend its me and him im sorry im just so pissed i read dracos remorse i stayed up till five am i really thought they were going to make it and then i cry hermoine end up with that rat retard ron if you like to see my very hurt heartbroken review it is on reviews for dracos return he falls in love with some other bicth im asking you to take pitty on my and write me a happy ending i would ask my friend but she is pure pure evil and would just ignore my begging since i dont know you i throw my self at your mercey and ask that you think about it sex and blowjobs please

sometimes you need a bit of angst and by your last remark...maybe a lot!!!

@6, holy hell hurray for smut! I have no idea where this is going but I had to hit the back button twice because I kept hitting next chapter instead of review lol. Ok, so obviously I finally made it to the review button on the third try, though I pretty much figured if I'd managed to forget why I scrolled down to the bottom of the page the third time I'd make a twofer review at 7.

OK so what I was going to say: it seems like someone is going to get hurt and I'm not entirely too sure who it's going to be yet. Right now my money's on both...wow, sex is great, but I almost wonder if Malfoy really is going to be able to pull it all off without consequences, ditto for Hermione since it was her thoughts about sleeping with the enemy not being so bad if there weren't consequences....for some reason that rang my bell.

@7, why am I not surprised- "not going to like what comes next" (ha-ha) just say "angst a-hoy" lol! Now I'm on the edge of my seat for ch 8! What the hell are they supposed to be getting her ready for?! Death Eater bidness must make Malfoy a not-so-happy-boy, what the hell's been going in the background...I wonder.

love it so good need more asap

mmmm mmmm...hot as usual...you do Draco/Hermione sex so well...can't wait to see where this is going...or better yet how you gonna get there...

@ ch 5, if I didn't know better I'd almost say you were evil, or you are *evil* and we aren't supposed to know about that, nevertheless I take issue with "whoops ran out of words"....what a twisted game you play! ;) lol

you're evil pure evil grrrr argh lol love the chapter though