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for You Change My Mind

by AkashaTheKitty

schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is it fluffy in here or is it just me? Kidding, kidding, obv! But thank you kitty!!! You saved my sanity... my paper might be a lost cause, but I can sleep semi-soundly tonight without having to get up and check the damn computer, so thank you for that! I liked the way you ended it. Nearing the bottom of the page I was starting to think you've gone soft on us and were going to give a 100% happily ever after ending. Silly me! Pshhh, I should know better by now! Your Draco is THE best in your stories, I am a total sucker for the bad boy, and your Draco is like the badest of the bad. *Sigh* *Drool* *Bows down to your incredible writing skills*

I'll be waiting not so patiently for the Silencio sequel, just so you know ;)
<3lizzy
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! Awesome!!! I love the last paragraph...You almost had me fooled. You HAVE to do a sequel...pretty please....I like Draco bad. Once she finds out he's a spy though, there can never be trust again. He really has no chance of redemption..this is just so wrong it can't ever be forgiven, especially if he gets someone killed in the process. Ooo, there's so many possibilities, you have to write a sequel!
person livelifelovehgdm
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what is with you and evil amazing endings!!! I HATE YOU AND I LOVE YOU!!! It was the same as Silencio! OMG> I loved it! BUT ITS SOOOOO SAD... gah! I can't handle it!

geo
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh oh why dont end it or have a sequel where they get out and run maybe? more!!
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH WOW!!! Totally didn't see that one coming! I love it that you update so quickly because this is such a good story!
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i wouldnt have guessed him the spy the bastard but i want and NNED a sequel or ill jump off my bed!!!please i dont waant to jump off my bed!:(
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ur mean making us think its gonna be all loveing and happy then throwing in the last paragraph wich makes u brilliant so i just love you for it grrr argh
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I actually really liked how your story ended. It was a complete surprise and i'm glad that I didn't see that comeing, i'm glad that it wasn't all puppy dog and rainbows lol .. i think if it had ended different, it wouldn't have felt right .. this ending suits the story very well. Good job. it was a really good story.

Mac.
person ichiruki
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wouldn't be surprised if he killed her, but I would be surprised if he let her live....I'm totally expecting her to die. I say this to let you know if that's the road this goes I won't be yelling like a crazy person at you LOL! Hell, to be honest I'm kind of expecting them both to die. Anyways, I loved chapter 9, so raw!

schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooooooo..good one...damn Harry! I see where you're going with this considering your title...at least I think so..this was a good build up, can't wait to see how you end it.