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perfect ending..

Wow, this was really great. The ending was fit although not particularilly satisfying. One wonders however if Hermione really buys Dracos Big Show, his change of heart in the forrest felt a bit..quick? Maybe she's just too trusting for her own good. And in looove.
Oh btw, the torturing-the-pregnant-girl -bit was truly chilling, I actually got bit nauseous when reading it, you can write very powerfully.

that was soooooooo fricken awesome!!! omg.. i loved the ending. at first iw as all 'aawwww draco you puppy, you' then i read the last line and i wa slike 'YEEESSs!!!!' HA HA loved it soooo much!

You are evil evil evil!!! I just love that ending and the story on the whole. Great twist!!!

I've got a feeling Draco and Hermione fic's are not your cup of tea and that is why you write horrible ending's for them. Regardless of all that (and being a huge fan of HG/DM fic's) I have to say that (apart from the last paragraph lol x), your stories are amazing. I just wish you could give them an happy ending for once, but alas that is not your style. I bet if you did do one with a happy ending but loads of shitty things happening throughout it could still have your style and be everyone's favourite story. Hope one day you consider and I'd love to know your favourite pairing, I'd be really shocked if it was DM/HG though!! thanks for the entertainment, I'd never tell a writer to change their story but I'll imagine you did an happy ending, they walked of together. The End lol xx

So ok, right then, no one's died....yet! LOL! (warning I'm feeling ridiculously silly as I write)

So he's a spy then? Hmmmm, interesting, just to let you know I will need more story line before I can reach a conclusion about what I think, yessss that much is apparent, obviously I will need more story to make an "informed" opinion.

Oh, but wait, I'm waiting on another sequel about this one story, what was it called...oh bother, the name escapes me...I'm so kidding of course! I just saw that "THIS IS NOT THE SEQUEL DAMNIT!" portion to your disclaimer today and snickered...being bothered by that are you? I don't know if it was always there, but seeing for the first time today was funny. You know funny-ha-ha ironic, not Alanis ironic.

If, however, you choose to someday write a story with all or some of the following:

-a few glistening dew drops
-a bed of roses (dethorned naturally-not such the loathsome task of old when one has magic on one's side you know)
-two gay unicorns
-smattering of gold paint and glitter
-vulgar cotton candy clouds
-glorious rainbows and other strange but romantic weather phenomenon
-Other "glorious" things related to earth's rotational patterns like sunsets or conversely sunrises
-a litter of puppies
-taffeta, ribbons and lace -oh my!-
-fuzzy polar bear cubs playing with equally cute fuzzy baby seals (that aren't bloodied eaten carcasses that is)
-basket of furry kittens (preferably not drowned)
-a singing forest creature moment (that doesn't result in hunting of said forest animals afterwards)
- running in fields via the old slow motion romantic music bit

I bet, and this is just conjecture on my part, that maybe, just maybe people would stop asking for sequels...but I tend to think it wouldn't make a difference because it's never enough is it?

I read a story sort of like this once, ok maybe it didn't have the polar bears cubs and baby seals bit or the two gay unicorns but if it did it might have actually been funny, (hades' balls why I did it, torture maybe?) but to protect the innocent and naive I shall nobly refrain from "going there" but I wanted to make a point about what torture is, the list above-yeah that's torture.

My-numbing-strap-you-to-a-chair-tape-your-eye-lids-open-while-you-are-forced-to-watch-someone--spit-in-your-bowl-of-captain-crunch-and-
then-force-feed-it-to-you-torture. It's all wrongness like bathroom sex (wait that's my next story-so scratch that not wrong like bathroom sex) corn holing (the sport) and littering (as in trashing with wrappers and general refuse) .

All the lovely twists that actually make someone want to read the next chapter or clamor for a sequel lol, yeah not so much! Godspeed moon kat and keep on writin'

to see mooncat reference please check out this very adorable kitteh:
http://icanhascheezburger.com/2007/05/13/god-speed-moon-cat/

Oy! What a twisted ending! Okay that's it, you owe all of us at least one fic with a nice happy ending. Haha! This fic is so well-written, im totally loving every chapter. Good Job!

Well, I don't know if I should love the end or hate it. It's just so....neutral. At least Hermione might be happy with him, initially. And well, he seemed to have feelings for her, too, but it might be difficult for him to love and use her. Poor Draco, he will be having a rough time!
Another really great and breathtaking story. Thank you for sharing!!! You're a genius!

Miss Kitty! I think it's time for the last chapter!! Please don't keep us waiting any longer. I am supposed to be writing a 10pg final paper and instead I keep checking back to see if you've updated, and all I have written is my name and the date. So pleaseeeeeeee hurry and post!! Only you could make me so obsessed with the ending to a fanfiction story, but I need to know, I really do. *Stares at screen until little 9 changes to a 10... cross-eyedness ensues*
....Is it up yet??
....now?
....NOW!?
.....NOWWWW!!?!?!?!?!?!!?

wow that was intense made me really sad