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for You Change My Mind

by AkashaTheKitty

person sa
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! that was pure evil!!! argh!!!! LOL!!! you're so bad! i can't help but love you for it though! that was a plot twist i didn't see coming but you're not really one for sappy endings now......

WELL im MY version, he falls in love with her and truely is a member of the order, he helps bring Voldie down, they get married and have lots of ickle babies, awww. Now see how much nicer that is? lol.

Hope you write another fic and this time i will NOT be lulled into thinking there shall be a happy ending!
person Anon***
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!! I had read some of the reviews before reading the actual fic, and I was waiting for the "OH NO!" ending. Then it showed up. BRILLIANT!!

I know you aren't thinking about doing a sequel, and I'm fine with my imagination, but if you do have a good idea of where the story should go in a sequel, you should TOTALLY write it! :)
person amyfeddy
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are so lucky I am a fast reader, I was holding my breathe throughout ch 6, if it would have been longer I probably would have passed out. I can't wait to read more of your stories. I caught this one and silencio after you completed them, and have been putting off important things just so I can read your stories. I love them, more more more.
person luvhp
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought the last paragraph was AWESOME!!! Bloody Brilliant at best. Here I was (some idiot fluff lover) thinking he truly wanted her, dumbass! LOL
I absolutely loved this story and it's going on my recommendation list 8D
person Crittenz
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your an evil evil evil git... *cries* I wanted unicorns and rainbows, However I shall hold the happy uber-fluffy image in my mind that Draco shall fall madly in love with Hermione and will not betray her or the order. Yes this is what I shall do. May you never make a sequel that disrupts my happy visions.. Leave me to my dillusions they keep me insane...!
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok there absolutely has to be a sequel. You can't be that cruell??
Loved the story and i so want to reed more!! Please consider ..
person Jessica
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yea, you are pretty mean lol but I love Silencio!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh that was good. I was thinking, how the hell is she going to wrap up the story in only one chapter when they are so short. I should have known better, I am repentant. I won't pester you for a sequel but I hope you do write one.
person Damiana
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!

So sneaky and evil!
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked your ending. You left the story open with so many possibilities for evil. But not too open that I feel like it is unfinished.

Sometimes challenges are just what we need :)