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person MewMew2
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant job on this! I just started reading this story but I must say, you've done an absolutely excellent job on it! Please update once more when you feel inclined to do so. And really, I believe that almost everyone who reads should also review, chances are that if you had enough time to read an updated story, then you have the 2 minutes or so to leave a note and comment on it. Even if you don't have the time to do so immediately after you've finished reading, at least leave one later on when you have the time. So saying that you 'just don't have the time' is complete rubbish! Thank you for posting.
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. i hope to see more soon
person cylean
schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, so far you've made me laugh, cry and bite my nails. Keep up the good work. can't wait for more.
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Arrg! I still love it! And its still jerking me around! Hey, you inspired me to write up my own FanFic with Remus and Sirius^^ Grim Tales. I'm not NEARLY as far along as you... And have no reviews at all! But I hope my story can be at least half as entertaining as yours!!!

Please Please PLEASE keep writing!!!!
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just found this story & I am enjoying it so far. Keep it up.
person Vish
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story, haven't finished yet. I felt i needed to comment on this chapter- I thought everything came to a head awfully fast. I suppose later events may explain it, but unless it's all chalked up to Sirius being drunk, he came out of his Super!Denial! pretty quickly.
person S e e K a H
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mike is a sweetheart....and I know I should be happy that Remus and Sirius got together, but I don't like the way Sirius wrapped things around. It seemed to possessive and yes, like he was using him. Toys? Heh, last time I checked, Remus was a human being. Remus really needs to start seeing Sirius completely for what he is right now before he allows him to mate with him. I don't think Sirius will be like Mike and just want to mess around.
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh yay!! i almost thought you gave up on this!! poor sirius but he kinda deserves it and what going through remus' head right now. i love this fic so i hope you update soon!!
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My god I love this story. Just read the whole thing in one evening. I thank you for the way I will feel when I wake up for work in six hours, but thats besides the point.

I love this story, I also hate this story, but, thats love right? Its dragged me from right to left, left to right. I cant wait for more, but your torturing this poor boys heart, I'm not sure I can take any more of this angsty sadness! Sirius is by far my favorite character of the HP series, so its hard to watch him be this evil prick, but I can see him doing all these things. Write more!

I would beg of you to make it happy, to model it directly after my own heart, to make it a fairy-tale with a happy ending... But as a fellow writer, I know that I can't ask anything more of you than to PLEASE... KEEP... WRITING!
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow I really like this story ^_^ I can't wait to see what happens next. If you have an updates list can you please add me? my email is bubbles5166@hotmail.com