rate_review Reviews

Hi,

I am really loving your story so far and I can't wait to read more of it when it is posted. I especially love how you make the emotions of Sirius and Remus seem to come alive for me, almost as though I a feeling them myself! It takes an amazing writer to do that, so congrats!

One thing that bothers me is that you switch from using the characters' first and last names a lot throughout the story. I especially noticed it when (before they were fighting), Remus and referred to Sirius as 'Black' in his own thoughts, and vice versa.

Also, in the books, it is spelled "Moony" rather than "Mooney".

As I said, I really love the story and I can't wait to see how Sirius makes things right again... A timeturner? Or maybe somehow using his influence as a Black to get Remus a job or make it so he doesn't get expelled? Those are my theories but I am very excited to read what actually happens.

Thanks again for an awesome story!
Cheers,
~Zozie

I absolutely love the story, and it would make me love you forever and ever if you write more and post again soon!! ^_^

Nice job. Thank you so much for updating this story. Please do so again when you find the time.

I really like this story so far! Sirius is awesome, but he does have his faults. I like that you show that in the story. I love Remus, and you write him really well. I hope that Sirius can make it right between them, I am curious how he will make it like it never happened, and I have some ideas. I am looking forward to the next update.

Will you be continuing this? I really like how this story is going. The characters are not OOC, & I like how you are portraying Sirius Black.
I wish you the best in this fic. ^_^

I am desperately into this story and I know the reviewers have been less-than sucktastic so I hope my begging for the next chapter will be sufficient enough to get you to pop out another chapter?!?!

please?

LOVE!!!!!! I absolutely love this work of fiction. I hope it can be finished soon.

Are you going to continue?
I love this story and have read it on this site and another one, both haven't been updated yet. I was just wondering because I really like it.
Sirius is a jerk for what he did, poor Remus

No no no no no!
I just finished and I nearly got a heartattack when I realized there was no more.
You gotta write more and quickly, this is a really good one ^^
Thank you for a good fic.

I found this story forever ago on ff.net I'm pretty sure... or maybe I'm delusional, and I found it here, and...

Well, never mind, that's hardly important. Important part is, I loved it then, I love it now, and I can't wait for you to continue!