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for When you love two

by lilmisblack

person hyper<3edward
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! i NEVER saw THAT coming....WOAH!
i am speechless
like really no word came out of my mouth for like 5 mins. i could even read!
it was SOOOOOOO good!!!
i LOVE charlie
for some reason i don't like bill so much
he's ok
but i like charlie the most
i think u should keep hermione and charlie together
if bill happens to join im ok with that (i will live threw it at least)
but as long as charlie and hermione stay together im good!
i just have to saw this and i don't say this a lot but your an exelent writer
one of the best on this site and i would know i have read almost all of these stories
i travel a lot and what else to you have to do on an airplane but read!
haha my boyfriend HATES it
but really you are truly one of the best writers on this site much better than some of the authors that are published now a days
please please please continue to write this fic. i ADORE it and i am sure that MANY other people do to!
~hyper
person amaya
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow this is such a great story. I thought it would be so different, that I didn't even want to read it but you proved me wrong. I can't wait for the next chapter
person Anon
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh Dear God continue this soon!!! This story is FANTASTIC and I literally want to cry at not having another chapter to eat up. Excellent work, please update asap!!
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I dont think you realize how awesome this story is!! I need you to continue and soon!! ooo you are so evil leaving it off like that... I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story!! please update soon! i cant wait to see what happens
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter love how it is working out, looking forward to next update
person Kili
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it
person jraskin
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!Update soon!!!
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow i really liked that!!
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh this is good.Who is the other girl I wonder *wink*!!! Update soon!!!