rate_review Reviews

good start.

Awesome! so Draco went out on a limb hope that Harry acceptes... cant wait to see what will happen next so up-dates soon... also it was so easy to read this time with it all spaced out thanx... finde a beta yet?

looks promissing so far, sounds like harry's going to have wings of some kind is he maybe going to be some kind of angel if so great I love the angel stories and there aren't enough good ones out there

so cute more please!

you need a beta, bad i can`t help you sorry. but good story like it will be follwing it.

humm... the idea looks good to soon to tell about the whole fic yet... who will be the Dom? make it Draco please, please, please!!! the only other thing i can ask is that you Space out the Pharagraphs of thought and infromation and speaking... its so hard to read when there all squished togeather! hope to see an up-date soon please!

Thanks for the new story. Love creature fics,especially when Harry and Draco are the main characters.

-waits for updates soon-- O.O ewww pretty


~Ero

Well I have a couple of things to say other than this is a nice story so far...
A. If Harry survived the AK why didn't his parents? Since they've the same blood as he does. I can see one but not both of them kicking the bucket. Since the DNA had to come from somewhere, hopefully you'll be addressing this in the fic.

B. Everyone is right there is a need for a beta in this but don't worry so-o much about it the story seems good so far!

C. You are going to explain the magical creature right? I mean it's mean to give details without it.... he has creature DNA no you don't get to know what it's from... ever -pouts-

anyway just some things I thought I'd ask


~Ero