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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooooh wow more!
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November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the start of your story so far. Sounds interesting and I am always up for a Top Harry and Bottom Draco. Also, I don't know how this whole beta thing works, because this would be my first, but I a willing to give it a try if you want. I'm pretty good with spelling and grammar.
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November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So...Harry has plan of his own, and he found himself not wanting to be linked with Dumbledore...would we understand why? And any interesting stuff about birthday presents?
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November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This seems like it will be a fun story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O;
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for more
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes!
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehe sounds cool. I loved the prologue. ^^ I always wished someone would tell draco why harry acted like he did towards him. Anyways, i just use microsoft word doc. to check my spelling.
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was good! I'm going to go against all the reviewers and say Dom Draco Sub Harry, just to mightily confuse you on which way to put them :P but I figure you've probably already worked out who's who by now, and if you haven't, oh well! But seriously I don't mind which way it goes. I liked Harry shooting down all Draco's idea's, I love scenes like that. Lol.
Let's see an update soon!
Let's see an update soon!
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great, I can't wait to read more. I am also really glad that you did that little part at the beginning so that we understand how and why Harry has creature blood. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the fantastic work.
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