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for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

by AnasellaEmm

schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah he is.. phew, so hot!!!!!! especially cause Tom Felton gives us the ultimate image of him.....hmmmmmmmm!! k drooling now, not good!!lol x I am so loving your fic and little Zane so cute!!! you must have children to understand them so much. My little boys got into the 'no mummy not like' with EVERY SINGLE BIT OF FOOD!!!! but he's so cute, I'm not just saying that cause I'm his mum, ok maybe I wouldn't call my own son ugly but he's got his dad's dark colouring and huge striking grey eyes with really long eyelashes (that everyone keeps rudely telling me to cut!, cause 'only girls have long lashes')... I love my baby lol and he's gonna love santa! when he sees how much we've! bought him!!! happy christmas!!!!
person amaya
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is totally different from how i thought it would start out. I really like what your doing with it. I can't wait until your next update {
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schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awe i want more!
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you finally updated... I thought you may have abandoned this story. I LOVE the dialogue between Zane and Draco...and yes all Malfoys are hotties..lol. Don't wait so long next time por favor : )
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i simly adore this story! You write so beautifull. I like the sory, the build up and especially little zane!! What a good creation!! Please update soon!!!
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I had almost forgotten about this story it's been so long since you updated. (There, now I have sufficiently guilt tripped you) I love this story so much! I can't wait to read more, so please update SOON~
person amyfeddy
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Draco and Zane are so cute, you have totally captured how much fun talking to a four year old can be, update soon.
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh you have to continue this story you write Daraco/Hermione so well! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE mke it a multi chapetr fic like 'Questions' college will finish for the year soon won't it?

Oh goad I'm a suckhole!....he he.
person Mischi
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Such an adorable story. I have thing for these kind of stories. Please please do continue. :)

I love how Draco communicates with Zane. Its very touching. :)

When's the next chap? :)

person anon.
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey ! just wanted to say the story sounds really good so far.
very interesting, good plot, editted nicely.
update soon ! :)