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for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

by AnasellaEmm

schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm so happy that Zane is back! Though I'm a little said the Hermione isn't preggers. Great update, I can't wait for more!
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I could so see Fred and George pushing Zane to pull so many pranks that Pansy just had to give him back. Great job! I'm sad that this is coming to an end, but excitedly looking forward to the sequel.
person Deathprincess...
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is THE BEST story on this or any website regarding Hermione and Draco... I squeal every time you have an update... in simpler terms... I LOVE THIS STORY SO FUCKING MUCH IT HURTS!!!!!!!
person smmz79
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YEAHHHH what a great chap!!!!! I can not believe that this story is almost over... I love it!!! way to go donny, harry, remus, and fred.... they were great at the interviews.... so hermione has been enlightened on why pansy looked so horrible and she has an idea it has something to do with the twins.... can not wait for the next chap and i am really excited about the sequel!!!!
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!!!! You brought Zane home!!!! Good chapter!! Can't wait to see the epilogue!!
person STORM89
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dude please update soon. i have been looking for a story like this for years, its soo good. so please update soon
person smmz79
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAAAHHHHH you left us on a cliffie how dare you.... great chap i love this story... i had a funny feeling something was going to happen everything seemed to be working out for draco and hermione.... i love fred and george and i am sure that hermione and draco would appreciate them being there for zane when he needed someone familiar besides pansy.... OMG no hair... everlasting dungbombs.... and now mirror they are great pansy will be going nuts.... she will be begging draco to take zane back in no time.... i love that donny and oliver are in love that is so sweet... great chap update soon i just have to know if hermione is pg!!!!!!
person miakitty
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
IS IT BLUE OR PINK????????
OH GOD PLEASE MAKE IT PINK!!!!!!!!
I'M SURE ZANE WOULD LOVE TO HAVE A SISTER OR BROTHER
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
o.o cliffhanger?! AAAAHHHH
person August Madison
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Eeeevvvvviiiillll! What color? AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Going crazy! Can't even type right! I love how Draco tells her that he hasn't told her, though. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh! What color?! And how's the mirror game going to make Pansy lose her mind? Totally agree that I would want the man to be outside the bathroom waiting but wouldn't want him to listen to me going. And love the expansion of the Zabini/Westin relationship. I'm glad you went into detail on her looks. Not what I had pictured, but much more like a person with whom I'd like to see Blaise. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Slowly progressing into mental dimensia!!!!! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! Blue, pink, blue, pink, maybe green since that's Zane's favorit..... see! Must know! :)