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DAMN YOU!!!!

Cliffy much?

You better help me soon or so help me God! *sighs* Great update, hun. Can't wait till your next one.

Although after reading the 4th chapter I was expecting them to get married. But this is alot more interesting since the law is involved with the 'tradistional family'. I am impress how you can take something that is common for a story but really put a good spin on it. Bravo! I will be looking forward to your next chapter. This is wonderful and I know it is going to be one that will be memoriable.

LOL! That last line was killer, I could totally picture the thought process in that line "like oh fuck it, straight to the point then"....and he blurts it. Hilarious! Wooo and another chapter so quickly! Yeah!

OMG OMG OMG

LOVE IT!!!

I love that your chapters are so long, I loved the abrupt ending, I love that it was his parents' idea, I love the sexual tension between Harry and Ginny, I love Donny!!! (maybe she should hook up with Charlie Weasley??), I love Zane's dialogue--it's so dead on for a little kid!

I just loooove it.

Can't wait to read the next chap when he has to convince her!!

I like how you ended ch 5 but i really hope you have the next chapter ready asap. i don't like sitting on pins and needles.
waiting for more.
ouch! watch out for the pin its very sharp

BRAPPPPS man! that was sik! i lik the way u ended the chapter. NO explanation to to granger or anything and went directly to "Will you marry me?" LOOOL that was the funniest shit. good job man. can't wait till the next chapter. laterz

I have just finished what you have written so far and am very impressed. I rarely venture into this section, for although I like the pairing very much, it is difficult to find a story here that is ADULT (and I don't mean adult as in "highly restricted because of excessive lemons" ;-)). Is it because it is essentially a teenager pairing and thus attracts less mature authors and readers alike? Either way, I like your story because it is nicely written, mature, well paced, not to mention that I love the way you portray little Zane - the way children talk, act and interact with adults, and his relationship with Draco. I am very much looking forward to an update. Cheers, Madietta

ohhhhhhhhhh a nice twist i cant wait to see what is going to happen next

Oh NO! You can't let Zane get taken away. He's so freakin cute. And I absolutely LURV the grandma/grandpa Narcissa/Lucius. They are so cute. Especially together! Would love to see more intimacy between them. And I agree with Donny. Hermione needs a man!!

I loved the term "shit for brains incubator" lol. Good chapter and nice little bit of intrigue at the end, like as in "oh good grief what does she want with the boy?" of course I think that and then realize it may mean Dramione interaction later lol. Again, good chapter. :)