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for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

by AnasellaEmm

person Utopia
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
chapter 5

WHAT AN ELEGANT AND SIMPLE PLOT DEVICE TO GET THEM TOGETHER! That idea was sheer genius and perfectly original! 10/10 for a top bit of plot!
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lets not be subtle now. i loved it more!!
person amyfeddy
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, your writing style and word choices make me laugh to no end. And I love donny,she is hilarious (i haave a sneaking suspicion she's you) anyway update soon a can't wait for hermiones response. I was so happy to see you updated so quickly, do it again because I know you live for my happiness.
person gabby1234
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh man oh man oh man i love this story so good its so good i could write a song on how this story is so good i love love i love love ladadaladadade reading it please write more i need more oh man so good so awesome man i love it i mean adore it please do not keep me in suspense i need that next chapter
person Maria
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story was a treat and an awesome birthday gift I gave myself. (Today is my birthday). I love your writing and am so excited to read more of this story. I love Zane and I really enjoyed Draco and Hermione's interactions with each other. Donny is also very cute. I really hope that you update soon.
person miahdrake
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I freakin love your story!
The ending literally made me laugh out loud!
Once again great update and super fast too! Cannot wait to see exactly how Hermione responds to THE question! :)
person coallynn
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, that so far this is one of my favorite Draco and Hermione Stories. I love that you still have the tension from school-days driving them to argue, it makes it more interesting. Keep up the good work.
person Luthi
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love it! I love this story and the chapters are just getting better and better.
I need to stop gifting him Vodka for Christmas - that line was just brilliant, I was laughing so hard my tummy's aching!

Can't wait for more!
Happy new year, btw ;-)
person Verie
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WoW! straight to the point eh? How fantastic!

OOh Cliffer! I'm so damn excited about their conversation on the next chap! HURRY!

and by the way, Happy Nyunyeer! :]

Verie
person bzbabe
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are evil for that cliffy!!! Amazingly good. I can't wait for the next chapter! :)