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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
=] I love this story!!! the plot and all! I can't wait to see it all completed!!!! keep up the good work! Zane is awsome! you write the parts of the kid so well. Who knew Draco could be such a wonderful father! so touching!
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was fantastic. It made my day. I loved Zane's enthusiasm and his name choice for the dinosaur. He is such an adorable kid. I love how you depicted the loving father and son relationship. It is so believable that Draco would marry someone just to keep Zane.
The bit about Malfoy going to parent-hell was hilarious. My favorite scene from this chapter has to be the one where Hermione is explaining to Zane why she is marrying his dad. Draco's line about Hermione's wardrobe was on fire was perfect. I smile everytime time I remember it.
I really hope you have mercy on your fans like me and update soon, just like you did today for which, by the way, thank you. You are a great writer and I look forward to your next chapter.
The bit about Malfoy going to parent-hell was hilarious. My favorite scene from this chapter has to be the one where Hermione is explaining to Zane why she is marrying his dad. Draco's line about Hermione's wardrobe was on fire was perfect. I smile everytime time I remember it.
I really hope you have mercy on your fans like me and update soon, just like you did today for which, by the way, thank you. You are a great writer and I look forward to your next chapter.
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha!! And it gets thicker! :)
wuv wuv wuv it!
update fast!
wuv wuv wuv it!
update fast!
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just read your story and I must admit that your story is one of the best stories I have ever read. You have not only the main story line of something common, but it has soo many twist and turns to make it soo unique to be an orginal instead of a fanfiction. I love the way the little things are into the story and the charcters are well portrade. The pace is excellently with them as the characters. I cannot wait to read what you have in store next time. Until than.
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(review of chpater five)
Yes!! Not quite what I expecting, but better, I think. Yes, definitely better.
Wah. I go and read the chapter now.
Yes!! Not quite what I expecting, but better, I think. Yes, definitely better.
Wah. I go and read the chapter now.
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(review of chapter six)
Agh! I knew it was coming, but I wasn't quite prepared to come to the current end. I hereby play the "standard reviewer" card:
PLEASE, pleasepleaseplease update!
Agh! I knew it was coming, but I wasn't quite prepared to come to the current end. I hereby play the "standard reviewer" card:
PLEASE, pleasepleaseplease update!
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey there!
you're writing a wonderful story! i really like it.
can't wait to get the next chapter to read...
love, vic
you're writing a wonderful story! i really like it.
can't wait to get the next chapter to read...
love, vic
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it and i love zane he is so cute!!!!! cant wait to read more so please update again soon!!!!!!!!!
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it and i love zane he is so cute!!!!! cant wait to read more so please update again soon!!!!!!!!!
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.