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for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

by AnasellaEmm

person Fiona
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've just read all the chapters in one sitting! It was too good and I just had to find out what happens next lol. This is such a sweet and lovely story, Zane is such a cute kid! I actually laughed out loud during some parts, and I found myself continually smiling! Really, just amazing. :)
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I really loved this first chapter. Pansy seems a bit out of character BUT in a good way. If that makes sense. I love how she is so neglectful and selfish. It makes you sympathize with Draco more and more. Its a lovely story and can I just say that I am so glad that they are divorced now? Poor Draco. Haha. I can't wait to read more. Thanks.
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well chapter two was awesome! First meeting of Hermione and Draco...DUN DUN DUN! I really like how you gave Hermione a career that was really original and not cliche. I personally think she'd be great with kids as well. And Zane is a cutie, but of course, most kids are. I just melt because of them, lol. Can't wait to read more, nice job.
person hppyflwr
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap!!!!!!!!!!!!! You have become my favorite author, and your story is the best story I have read in the whole wide world.

PLease Please Please update I am so hooked in this sotry is not even funny.

hppyflwr
person Betty
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, hope it doesn't take a year for you to finish it.
person little, old me
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hi, I just wanted to tell you that your fic is fantastic. I really like the references to songs and the main reason why a started to read this was the title, as I really like AWCoI. The story line is just so interesting and when I'm done with a chapter I always wonder what will come next. I also love the idea of Draco being such a loving parent and I think that you have a real talent for keeping everyone in character and still adapting them to your story...to sum it all up: great work!
and PLEASE update! ;-)
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow I love this story! I can't wait until the next chapter!
person Delfin
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh man, i just read the whole story and i truly like it :D

update
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You actually made me laugh out loud in some points. I love this story and look forward to the next chapter!
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story is great! The discord between Draco and Hermione was shown very well. Please don't let them instantly fall in love with each other. I would love to see the tension continue for awhile, then one day Draco can kiss her and show her why he was the Slytherin sex god!

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