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for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

by AnasellaEmm

person chelsea
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!! freaking awesome!!! I loved it...i kinda wish hermione had been pregnant...but maybe that'll come at a later time? =)well you just made my day...Thanks so much for updating!
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! I am so glad Zane is back where he belongs. The way you described Pansy walking into the courtroom was HYSTERICAL!! Stupid bitch deserves everything she got. I was a bit disappointed that Hermione wasn't pregnant, but I think it made for better story your way. =) Maybe that will be something we see in the last chapter? *fingers crossed*
person shelagh
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Of course Rosie first!!!! Great job!
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you update this story very frequently in the future. I love reading it and can't wait to see where it goes. I really hope you don't end it there. At least an epilogue.
person Anon
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg that is too cute.
i love it
person koneko-chan
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Yay! Zane's back with his parents! Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
person Anon
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeee, that was just....awwwwwwwwwwwwwww. Oh and yay, I was right, I didn't think she'd be pregnant, but there's plenty of time for that practising now, isn't there? *evil grin* And Zane and his 'Rosie' - had to see Rosie first - that's just so cute!!!!! Loved it!!!
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Such an amazing update!
I'm so glad that Zane is back with Draco and Hermione :)
And I am so excited that you're planning a sequel!
Can't wait to read more.
person kittycat30
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!! Finally!!! I couldn't stop laughing at the beginning when Zane was talking to "Jello"! *still snickering* I don't think kids need a reason to strip & run around like savages - mine do it all the time. You don't think their dad is rewarding them for driving me crazy, do you? Hhhmmm, I'll look into that... Good for D & H, they should wait a bit, so they both know what's happening. Love the story!
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohh my goodness! I'm SO SO SO SO SOOO happy! Fantastic chapter! I'm so glad that little Zane is back with his family, and that Fred and George helped him while he was at Pansy's. :) More soon, please!