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for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

by AnasellaEmm

person kazfeist
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if I reviewed in this forum, but I'm glad this is up! Now, let's get going with the next chapter, eh? That is, if classes are going well. My Anna just started second semester today. :D
person Fiona
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved the newest chapter! Can't wait to read more ^^
person Anathema
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God.


I was LITERALLY laughing out loud at the internal dialogue that Draco and Hermione were having. I am SO loving this story! It absolutely makes my day to log in here and see that it's been updated.

Looking forward to your next chapter, luv!!!
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You handled the "announcement" brilliantly, I love the way you're building the relationship between Hermione and Draco; not too fast, not too slow. Either one would make the story lose the 'magic' that's garnered so many reviews, and you've walked the tightrope with skill.

Fwah, I wonder if you bother to appreciate a single review in so many... But I'll continue to review in either case.
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And another wonderful chapter! I loved it. I was reading through it and I started thinking that Draco was out of character...and then it got to the end when he confronted Harry and Ron and there was our old Draco again! It was perfect. So you did a wonderful job with him, as well as the others. Zane makes me grin. He is so cute. I can't wait for the next update, I look forward to it. :)
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think I got one of your many many reviews lol. I'm going to delete it because its not mine *sigh* but here it is.

From SynneR:
loved it just like always! Zane is the cutest thing ever and I really can't wait for their asses to get married I wanna see how htey handle living with each other! lol
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like a mature Draco. Kid's will do that to you. :D
person ichiruki
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome!!! Damn that's a lot of news breaking for one day, but still, cute and cuddly and pointing towards smut. Me likey.
person Granola
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't review that much, but I just wanted to say thank you for writing such a consistently great and funny story. I like reading Draco and Hermione stories but those that just have them jump into bed with eachother without the whole "we hated eachother's guts for seven years" thing being taken care of feel so fake, and your story deals with it very well I might add. Also, conversations with Zane, especially the parts where Draco thinks about "Parent Hell" had me lauging out loud. So thanks!
person miahdrake
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Once again wonderful update!
I love where this story is going! And I really enjoyed reading everyone's reaction to their engagement! Great Job!