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for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

by AnasellaEmm

schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this greatly, especially the internal mental commentary Draco & Hermione go through, in contrast to the external arguments. I haven't totally warmed up to Donny (she sometimes seems a bit too frenetic & ditzy for a teacher), but I love Zane and Wolf. They are a happy addition to the HP family. Back to Donny, couldn't Hermione arrange for her to meet Oliver? After all, he was Harry's Quidditch captain in school: she needs to use her connections! Will be watching for updates. Thanks.
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh no, you stopped there??? lol. ok i will try as patiently as i can to wait for the next chapter. keep up the good writing!!
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Can't wait for more. :D
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHH!!!! GET BACK HERE AND WRITE MORE! Don't leave me hangin' here honey. I want....no I NEED to know what happens! And you never told us but.....is this the type of marriage that has to be....well, you know.....*whispers* consummated? That could certainly throw a kink into their "marriage of convenience" plan don't ya think? Anyway, great update and I REALLY can't wait for your next update!
person Verie
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! That's got to be on my list! The "One-of-the-Most-Evil-Cliffhangers-I've-ever-read-in-DMHG-fandom-List" You've seriously won your position there! And the more I'm in love with your story!

So, will that mean you'll update.. say? before the weekend comes? :]
WEDDING! OMG! and I just love how Draco's mind works on Hermione's dress to get rid of. >:]
Verie
person ichiruki
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome, I wonder if there will be an objection like Pansy breaking from no where to protest lol. Most likely not, still, yea to the new chapter!
person Maria
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gosh. I'm deeply in love with "A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy". Your writing makes me want to start writing again, you are so inspiring. I would love to write a longer review, but I've got classes to prepare for. I'll write you a review as soon as I get the chance. I just wanted to let you know that you made my day once again. Ever since chapter 7 I've been checking my email and aff.net to see if you updated. It was the best feeling in the world to open my inbox tonight, and see that I received an email from you. Thank you so much for relieving the pain of my longing heart. Now I dutifully await your next masterpiece of a chapter. I really, really love your writing, AnasellaEmm. You rock hard!
person -B-
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It makes me smile. I can not wait for the next chapter.
person Fiona
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Why did he look hungry? Did he not eat breakfast?" LOL.. oh Hermione.. she has no idea yet haha. ^^
person mhaj78
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh you CAN'T leave us hanging there!!! Okay, there has to be some kind of even minor breakthrough on the wedding night...a kiss at least? a cuddle? :)