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for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

by AnasellaEmm

person Maria
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9 was another fabulous addition. I loved very word. I appreciate your descriptions and your well thought out plot. I love how you are building Draco and Hermione's relationship with each other. Please ignore people who just want a mindless sex romp. They can go read other stories that have been written. Your storytelling skills are wonderful and I hope you don't get discouraged when people just tell you to skip the plot for sex. This story of yours is my favorite fanfiction and I can't wait to see how Draco and Hermione develop their relationship further. Thank you for updating. I plan to write proper reviews for ch 8 and 9 this weekend. Take care. You are an awesome writer.
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it! oh you are simply briliant!!!! please update soon, i will be checking every day!!
person skydancer
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
apart from the Kimono and fez wearing elf(giggle!) The Pinata reference is wonderful! So perfect a desription !
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for updating, I feel like I've been waiting forever!!! and I really appreciated the email!

Well so much to tell from this chapter, Zane lol he is such a cute character!!!! Lucius and Narcissa are just brilliant and Draco and Hermione....how are you keeping them in character?! it must be really hard!!

It bought back so many memories from my own wedding! I really can't wait for your next update, I hope it's not too long!!!
person Verie
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Its so sincere. So lovely.
Hey, they're so good actors and actress. Wait.. They are only acting right? Acting like they act that they don't like each other and at the same time acting that they do? Hmm. damn. that's so twisted! and unbelievably fun!

do you do mail updates? just in case I'd love to get them. :]
verihappy@yahoo.com <- that's me!

Verie
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You alway manage to make me laugh and this chapter is no exception except for it hurts to laugh right now! I can't wait for the next chapter. :D
person ocard
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow i LOVE this story :D!!!
great chapter... and i loved the ceremony!

how long do you think this story will be? i hope it's long, cuz i love your writing and reading what you've added ^_^

xoxoxoxo
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was great! Zane and Wolf crack me up. I hope you can update soon because I'm completely addicted to this story and I can't wait to really get into the think of things. Hope so read more soon!
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
just skip it all and write the sex part
person FantasyAxis
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brillent as usual. I love how just the simplest touches make them go crazy for each other. Why do I have the feeling that Draco's history is going to repeat itself and it going to turn out the way he wants it to be? Update real soon.