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for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

by AnasellaEmm

person Anon
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update more!!!!!!!!!!
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and I come back chapter after chapter over and over again because it is that wonderful.
person Lexy Malfoy
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I soooo wanted to choke that lady. WTF? Draco's right. Damn straight she needs to get laid.

Anywho...great update. Can't wait for your next one. Keep it up, hun. =D
person Verie
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Boy, was that nerve-wrecking or what? And for cute Zane, he gets more adorable and cute as ever. I just love those days when kids are as innocent as a cute little button.

Just keep writing, just keep writing, writing. What do you do? You...wriiite. :] (Impersonating Dory from Finding Nemo)

I just love your craft. :]
Verie
person amyfeddy
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My only complaint is that it wasn't long ehough. I love your story and your writing style so much I really don't like to stop reading. I can't wait to read more update quickly please waiting is pure torture.
person Losername
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I'm so so so so so happy that you updated, I was going crazy from the wait! The first thing I thought of when you mentioned the death eater dolls was that hermione should give zane a harry potter doll to fight the death eaters and annoy the hell outta draco lol.
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i think i have said this once before...i love this story its one of my favorites and i cant wait until more chapters are posted
person Sara
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is getting fun... please please please update soon!
person Jenn
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Normally I despise flashbacks, but you wove it in so perfectly that it didn't feel like I hit a brick wall. You are brutal though... that was a rough emotional roller coaster and I'm so looking forward to the next chapter. :)
person 2cute2B4got10
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK next chapter!! That was tooo cute to end right there!! i need more !!!!