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Can we just lock Draco and Hermione in a room, spike their tea with lust potion and then let them go for it?! The sexual tension is wafting off the screen! But we'd have to keep 'Zach' out of the way - I don't think they're up for explaining why Daddy is on top of Mummy and wiggling about! lol!

11/10

oh let the shagging commence! in due time of course! i loved zane's inner monologues, and the flirting Hermione and Draco were doing, "ouchie in his pants" indeed! oh yea, and i hate Pansy, racist bitch!

I like it. Please update soon.

another fabulous chapter! I love how you write Zane.

I love this story soooooooooo! much!!. I can't wait for your next update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
we need some Draco/Hermione lovin ;)

please........hurry :)

you need to update more often! your story is one of the best.

This fiction is just to good for words. Please update soon. I cannot wait to read the next chapter, you are doing great.

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Aww yay another chapter! Haha, it was so funny when you were talking about the showers. Aww, so cute. Hehe. And wow, that DMP lady (right?) was a meany! Grrr. They are good parents. I'm so glad that Draco got rid of the Death Eater toys. I would have reacted like Hermione did. WHO THE HELL MAKES DEATH EATER TOYS?! Lol. We might as well start making Hitler Action figures. :P

I really enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait for more dear.

Normally I don't try to suggest ideas for other people's stories. But every once in awhile I read a story that actually gets my mind thinking about things that could happen if only. So my crazy brain wanted to share the idea of them having a pool party. I don't know if you mentioned when Zane's birthday was but isn't Draco's in the summer. This could give Donnie a chance to get hermione to show off a bit and possibly wear a bikini of some kind. Possible situation could occur where Zane trys to step in and stop someone from hurting hermione either accidently or on purpose. Giving Draco a chance to step in himself and save hermione from someone or something. You can ignore this suggestion which is cool or if you want me to explain more I would be more than happy to. I hope to see more of your story soon! Keep up the good work.