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for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy

by AnasellaEmm

schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You. Are. EVIL!!!!

It's just WRONG to end a chapter like that! But I loved this chapter. Pobrecito Draco! And aaaawwwwwww at Hermione's maternal instincts.

Update again soon dearest, and I'll give you a cookie. *g*
person ichiruki
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw so sweet ;) I just got over the flu last week, if only it had lasted the 24 hours! Draco's a lucky bastard. Well, and hello uber sexual tension, that part, not so lucky actually...but hmmm that hint for the next chapter has me very excited and on edge for what is to come next!


person char6785
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please please please update this story soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Anasella Em, I cannot say enough about how much I am enjoying your story. Alot of the work on this site are cliched and tedious at best, but yours is so intuitive, interesting, and laugh-out-loud funny. The moments between Hermione and Draco seem so realistic, and I'm so happy to act as a voyeur to their life.
Please add another chapter as soon as possible.. I won't harp on you to get it out right now, I understand that real life and the ever-inconstant muse interfere.
But when you do post another chapter, I'll be cheering at the gate of your worshippers! =D
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and you have AMAZING taste in music. I swear, I love all of the songs you used as your chapter titles. I just adore you lol. <3
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
They both have the same dream then maybe all hope isn't lost please kee going need to know more.
person hppyflwr
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so going to die if Pansy keep Zane! Please tell me she doesn't get to keep Zane? This is one of the best daddy Draco fiction I have ever read. Please update soon darling.

hppyflwr
person Ellanath
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! I love Zane!!!! You have the kid down to a 'T'! I nearly choked on my drink from his comments!
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wooot! I love this story so much. I actually nominated it at the Dramoine Awards (and someone else nominated it for a category besides the one I did so you are nominated twice)! :)

This chapter was great and I was so excited with such a fast update. I love how Draco and Hermione interact alone and then with Zane and now with the DMP lady. Its really in character the different ways they express themselves. I think you are doing a fantastic job.

The sexual frustration is just hilarious to me and now that they decided to mess with the DMP lady's head a bit then that menas the sexual tension is just going to increase. In no time they'll be jumping each other's bones! Lol. Can't wait. :P

And Zane is so freaking cute! I love how you started putting his thoughts in here (in the italics) because it is so funny. He is so adorable and I think you do a four year old very well.

Can't wait for more dear.
person Randi
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, write more soon! It was a long time since I became this addictive to fanfiction like this.